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HeziTheGreat
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I'm not much of a fan of system series but I'm a man of my word and read this to return feedback. This review is based off the first 3 chapters. At first I was slightly turned off by (from my understanding, please correct me if I am wrong author) what was "reverse" r*pe that the victim ended up liking??? Later on the MC has a convo with a friend who admits to sexually harassing his boss. These types of things take me out of wanting to read most stories, but the plot is pretty good so hopefully this isn't a recurring theme. And that is my ONLY complaint outside of minor punctuation mistakes.(Some may be due to different writing rules in different countries.) The author is a great story-teller and did a great job of creating a relatable MC who seemed down on his luck but finally gets an opportunity of a lifetime. I noticed that the author has already uploaded this series with quite a bit of content (DRAFT version) but I will wait on this version to be updated. Good luck in the WPC.

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Conquering Space With My Licking System

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Hey, thanks. There was a reason why he liked it. it's explained later on. it's also a key ingredient in his system. Some punctuation errors are actual errors lol. But yeah, I often mix rules. Thanks for reading and good luck with yours too.