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SleepyFrey
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2022-07-15 21:15

Currently I have read about 144 chapters. My brain may be like Swiss cheese but I can still explain why I love this story. The writing is unique, kind of like a poem at times and consistent. The story develops in many directions with one goal in the end. While one thing happens, there are others happening at the same time. And things don't happen like what you would expect- First, there is this girl that gives him (MC) his power. It's absolutely not the end of the story, it's the beginning. The story itself isn't just based on licking or giving in to human desires, it's more than that. The MC grows with his friends by his side, gets to know more people and then he also grows in strength. He isn't the only main character of this story though, since there is a girl named Rin. Maybe I'm stupid but I'm still confused on how important she will be or why she is that important. Rin changes, just like the MC, but they all have those kind of values that they stick with. MC is sometimes stupid and insecure, but gets more confident as time passes. Rin is emotionally instable and continues to be so, but also gets acknowledged by many people, or how to say it? The best buddy of the year, John, stays like he his (really fits his character) but some things change even for him (And for the girl that likes him if you get what I mean). My favourite character right now is Skullmandathor! That grandpa is really funny even if the main character exploits the poor guy. I mean they are friends, but Skully really should start thinking about his friend-choices. The updating stability is so stable I am now cured from any imbalance I had. World Background should be in plural, there are many worlds and when a new world is introduced, it's explained enough to understand everything I wanted to know. History - like the overtaking of intelligent robots first or how this planet has some gods that they imprisoned for reasons and even more - gets mentioned from time to time. It fills gaps but still leaves you curious for more. Overall, I see no reason to not read this. I wasn't that interested in this story at first because I'm somewhat afraid of possible futures, even if they are just fiction. What first catched my attention was the title- but I can't be the only one right? :D

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SleepyFrey
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So uh did this work? Am I alright? Is this okay? Will it be fine?

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okay, okay! OKAY!!! Woah! I'm so happy right now, it feels wrong to reply lol. Your review literally just made my day. Thanks for reading- Thanks for reviewing and- Really, Thanks a looooot!!! (idk what to say anymore 🤣) Also, don't forget to have a lovely day.

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(👀 Why are talking like I'm holding a gun to your head?)

SleepyFrey:So uh did this work? Am I alright? Is this okay? Will it be fine?
SleepyFrey
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You too have a lovely day and thank you too!

Nr_Yet1208:okay, okay! OKAY!!! Woah! I'm so happy right now, it feels wrong to reply lol. Your review literally just made my day. Thanks for reading- Thanks for reviewing and- Really, Thanks a looooot!!! (idk what to say anymore 🤣) Also, don't forget to have a lovely day.
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SleepyFrey:You too have a lovely day and thank you too!
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(😂 Because I always manage to somehow get my comments censored and I don't know how)

Nr_Yet1208:(👀 Why are talking like I'm holding a gun to your head?)
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(I honestly would have been sad if this somehow got censored. but it didn't, so glad XD)

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Nr_Yet1208:(I honestly would have been sad if this somehow got censored. but it didn't, so glad XD)
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