Item: Conquering Space With My Licking System
Rating: 5
Author: Aeipathy_02

Aeipathy_02Lv112yr

2022-03-03 16:25

Write this review around the latest four chapters so far. Review Proper (Might contain spoilers ahead!!!) Writing Quality. Well, I'm still learning a lot about writing grammar myself so other than the basic grammar stuff, I can't say much. However, the author really did well in writing the narratives for this story. The structure of each scene and grammar are on par with the top novels here at WN. Stability of Updates: So far the author has stable updates, and mentioned in the synopsis that it will be around Saturday and Sunday. Good thing, since the readers will not be anxious each day wondering when there will be updates. Story Development. The opening chapter started with a bang! It's very interesting. Then it smoothly transitioned to the protagonist's life. Theodore was vividly described as someone normal and as a normal person as well, I can relate well. I looked forward to the further development of the story. Character Design. Based on how the author describes the characters, they really act that way and speak the way in line with their personalities. Nothing feels forced in the dialogues and such. World Background. I love it. I myself am a fan of system novels. And with a setting that is intergalactic and sci-fi added, truly a chef's kiss. Recommendation: Just read the first chapter, and I know you will definitely like to continue reading it. It's sad that I don't have stones right now, but I will definitely vote for this when I have. Overall, this will definitely stay in my library! I look forward to more chaps! Great work, author!

Conquering Space With My Licking System

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Nr_Yet1208Author

Thank you. Glad you liked it 💞 I'll try my best not to disappoint.

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