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Jaurnel
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2022-11-26 07:28

It’s a good story. It is obviously not wish fullfillment; other people are implied to have ”heat” other than the protag. The one thing i’ve always hated is implied “heat” especially after they just talked down about the protag or me self inserted. That happened with his mom and her boyfriend. (the dad has a thing for A.I) Protag is still a wimp as of chapter 62; he is getting a little bit better. At the same time there are A.I, other intelligent life, “Qmales” or humans who can cop----- with both genders, and space exploration. Though there isn’t much action at all... Actually the real protag is our mcs best friend, and the story follows and praises him way too much... Females fall in love at first sight, and he protects our wimp mc like the good friend he is. Expect gay jokes. Protag has a charm ability, attributes plus assignable stat points, a licking system; take it literally. The only romance the mc has had so far is with an A.I and we got c*^>blocked because of his conscience. Oh, his sister is a yandere. That's the one thing that kept me going. (almost dropped when the mother forced political marriage onto her; she’s blackmailing her by sending the mc as a hostage to another species prince..) Not that the mc gives her the time of day... In conclusion, if you have the time and nothing else to do, give it a gamble. And I recommend free readers to wait until it’s 24hrs free...

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