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Nukame17
Nukame17Lv42yr
2022-05-27 19:51

Good story! You actually made de mc loss of humanity seem realistic, considering the circumstances and all the characters feel alive too. The only bad thing about the story so far is that there are not enough chapters.

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Valtura
ValturaAuthor

Thank you for the review! I really enjoy writing and reading character development so I’m estatic to hear this. I’m not sure how other writers on here update so much, but I’ll be continuing on trying to put out as much chapters as I can.

Demi_Scribe
Demi_ScribeLv4

hey author doesn't it feel like u need to write something more about your story in synopsis

tortle
tortleLv3

harem? lemons?

Valtura:Thank you for the review! I really enjoy writing and reading character development so I’m estatic to hear this. I’m not sure how other writers on here update so much, but I’ll be continuing on trying to put out as much chapters as I can.
Kyriakos
KyriakosLv15

For the love of God, no harems, please!

DrGrace
DrGraceLv14

but I would love a good slow burn legit love interest 👻

Kyriakos:For the love of God, no harems, please!
armentia
armentiaLv14

Hoping for this to be non harem since I'm liking this already hahahaha

PrideIsEternal
PrideIsEternalLv1

it's amazing that we can find a novel pushing a homophobic agenda in 2022, i'm glad this is already trending, this novel should be removed, disgusting, author attacking people with homophobic comments

nah_7634
nah_7634Lv4

It's amazing how pressed you are. you aren't changing his opinion, you can just not read the book and move on, but of course you have to start a drama. I mean, isn't that all Pride is there for? I'm not against anything related to LGBTQ other than the fact that people like you tend to start unnecessary drama

PrideIsEternal:it's amazing that we can find a novel pushing a homophobic agenda in 2022, i'm glad this is already trending, this novel should be removed, disgusting, author attacking people with homophobic comments
PrideIsEternal
PrideIsEternalLv1

I don't really appreciate the "people like you" comment but for your first part, I am really angry and I have read it and don't plan to continue reading. The author could have gracefully stepped down but he attacked his reader who posted screenshots online of their conversation, the blatant alts and everything, it was a good story but I just get really upset that someone has to use "boyfriend" as an insult...I mean really...women can have girlfriends, men can have boyfriends. I know I won't change his opinion, I'm just upset, I apologize if my drama as you say upsets you, that's not the intention, my emotions get the best of me

nah_7634:It's amazing how pressed you are. you aren't changing his opinion, you can just not read the book and move on, but of course you have to start a drama. I mean, isn't that all Pride is there for? I'm not against anything related to LGBTQ other than the fact that people like you tend to start unnecessary drama
PrideIsEternal
PrideIsEternalLv1

But even the conversation itself is a complete mess, why even become a writer, might as well make a word doc and save it somewhere no one can see

nah_7634:It's amazing how pressed you are. you aren't changing his opinion, you can just not read the book and move on, but of course you have to start a drama. I mean, isn't that all Pride is there for? I'm not against anything related to LGBTQ other than the fact that people like you tend to start unnecessary drama
nah_7634
nah_7634Lv4

It's actually fine, doesn't upset me too much. The only thing was that I'm just kind of annoyed at seeing arguments like this everywhere, i understand that you have to defend yourself but sometimes it just gets out of the hand and just becomes an annoying block of text to look at

PrideIsEternal:I don't really appreciate the "people like you" comment but for your first part, I am really angry and I have read it and don't plan to continue reading. The author could have gracefully stepped down but he attacked his reader who posted screenshots online of their conversation, the blatant alts and everything, it was a good story but I just get really upset that someone has to use "boyfriend" as an insult...I mean really...women can have girlfriends, men can have boyfriends. I know I won't change his opinion, I'm just upset, I apologize if my drama as you say upsets you, that's not the intention, my emotions get the best of me
PrideIsEternal
PrideIsEternalLv1

I get that, I'm done and I apologize, I did my part serving my little justice and saying my piece for the community. The novel was good but like the reviews are saying, the dude is literally a simp, he turns on a dime, almost complete character change when meeting that girl, we had a great idea of his character (though it got real sketch when saving the first girl) but then he flips, serves himself on a platter and all the character growth, everything we came to understand about him is made null and it makes no sense why he left those dudes alive either since it's not in line with what he's done, too forced.

nah_7634:It's actually fine, doesn't upset me too much. The only thing was that I'm just kind of annoyed at seeing arguments like this everywhere, i understand that you have to defend yourself but sometimes it just gets out of the hand and just becomes an annoying block of text to look at
nah_7634
nah_7634Lv4

I haven't even read it lol, and I'm not planning to either

PrideIsEternal:I get that, I'm done and I apologize, I did my part serving my little justice and saying my piece for the community. The novel was good but like the reviews are saying, the dude is literally a simp, he turns on a dime, almost complete character change when meeting that girl, we had a great idea of his character (though it got real sketch when saving the first girl) but then he flips, serves himself on a platter and all the character growth, everything we came to understand about him is made null and it makes no sense why he left those dudes alive either since it's not in line with what he's done, too forced.
TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

I mean if he becomes a monster proper he needs women for all the kinds of reproduction! Eggs, birth, asexual spliting of self, xenomorph style...

Kyriakos:For the love of God, no harems, please!
Sparky357
Sparky357Lv15

My thoughts are more to drop off everyone at the military base and praent a ultimatum to this girl become stronger with tools and find me and if not you are not worthy also if you could convert from ratios to stat multipliers such as 1:1.5 to instead a *1 bonus it's a *1.5 bonus to a stat and such also more world perspectives and building would be nice and what is the goal of our Mc because he seems lost and needs a goal for what he does not just survive take for example Revered Insanity he is ruthless like our mc but only if it benefits him What I am suggesting that either he distances himself from society or he starts manipulating them to his goal of Eternity for only when you cannot die then you can enjoy the wonders of the universe and life.

jason_minchue
jason_minchueLv14

Honestly really agree with the whole people like you. most people see something that goes against there beliefs just keep scrolling or find something else to look at and read. It would be like me finding out the main character in a book was gay and i raged about it not being a straight person instead of just finding something more in my lane. it's people like you who ruin things for others without even trying just by going after one homophobic person like it's really going to change them or guide people to support what you do. it's people like you who make me regret supporting pride in any form. just like how a handful of people give bikers a bad name, people like you give the pride community a bad name of being the equivalency of a race biter but with sexual preferences. there I spoke my mind.

PrideIsEternal:I don't really appreciate the "people like you" comment but for your first part, I am really angry and I have read it and don't plan to continue reading. The author could have gracefully stepped down but he attacked his reader who posted screenshots online of their conversation, the blatant alts and everything, it was a good story but I just get really upset that someone has to use "boyfriend" as an insult...I mean really...women can have girlfriends, men can have boyfriends. I know I won't change his opinion, I'm just upset, I apologize if my drama as you say upsets you, that's not the intention, my emotions get the best of me
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Andrew303300
Andrew303300Lv14

I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways: Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it. Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.

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