Kyriakos

I'm done with this garbage book

why are you making the mc so stupid?

the chariot is so stupid. why not an undead beholder that shoots disintegration beams from his eye stalks. Anything would be cooler than a 5 skid sleigh...

tacky garbage. I can't imagine living in a metal box that is nothing but yellow. nightmare.

I wish he would stop the dual exhistance at this point. I real want to see him unleash his full potential.

Isn't it White Flame? Jesus, can you try to remember the names of your own characters??? It's bad enough you play gender bender with your pronouns calling characters he or she. This is your story dude, can you at least put a tiny bit of effort to be consistent ffs

what does he need the 5 million for? he still has a hundred million. Just carrying it around ....

y not the liquid mana potions?

This book is getting a little bit too cutesy. Sure hope this changes ...

Sorry Author, the mc is just too dumb. I'm out, GOODLUCK