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Whatthejug_0221
Whatthejug_0221Lv112yr
2022-07-24 11:23

The writing quality is better than average, especially compared to a lot of novels I've read. Story development is alright, I like the fact that we also get to experience some of the struggles from the other characters, which to me is a sort of baseline of how well the mc is doing. Character design isn't the best but it's not bad, not much detail goes into the description of the characters but it's enough to imagine how they look. Updating stability can sometimes be inconsistent from what I see but as the author has a job that's to be expected, it's impressive that chapters are realeased often to begin with which means a lot of the author's free time goes into this. I respect the dedication, it reveals his compassion towards this novel. Now for world background I'm going to use the description of the area the mc starts off in as there hasn't been anything pass that yet. The descriptions are good, we get a good idea of the campus and the layout of the place, which really is all we need. Although there could be better descriptions of the area to help visualize for the reader. Overall I'm really enjoying the story so far. Though I am a bit worried of the change of personality in the mc, he's becoming a bit less "insane" then he was originally started off ever since the introduction of the love interest. None the less I'm excited to see where the story is going, keep it up author!

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PrideIsEternal
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CAN SOMEONE PLEASE explain to me why the one of author's alt Sith_Cloud is going around being an aggressive homophobe? His alt account which he basically flat out admins to only reviews and comments against readers posts "boyfriend" like the ultimate insult and misuses the word simp over and over, this toxic attitude is disgusting.

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Andrew303300
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I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways: Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it. Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.

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