Someone advised me to write my own review to explain things that I couldn't include in a synopsis. So here we go. 1. English isn't the author's first or second language so there are some mistakes. And the author will be grateful if you point them out to him. 2. Pacing is slow. There are new OCs introduced, and some world background added. And Author tries to follow the rule 'show, don't tell' as much as his writing skills allow him to. 3. The story concentrates on cultivation and kingdom building mostly so it may get a bit boring. 4. Author tries to fill the plot holes of the original as much as he can and tries to make every development as logical as possible. All of the cheats MC gets will follow the rules of the world. So there will be no system or other otherworldly powers. 5. Events will part ways with canon the further it goes. So it will be a completely different story from canon if the author will be able to finish it.
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will it be the same as the og ? Nie li goes back in time, only for him to bully kids, gets his father in law killed, sends his girl/s to a different sect not knowing what could happen, his former 'teacher' sacrifices herself again while he's bullying a little girl ? and be oblivious to everything that's happening,...
No. Events will be changed too much by then. And please leave your comments under the review of TypeFantasyHeart.
Mental:will it be the same as the og ? Nie li goes back in time, only for him to bully kids, gets his father in law killed, sends his girl/s to a different sect not knowing what could happen, his former 'teacher' sacrifices herself again while he's bullying a little girl ? and be oblivious to everything that's happening,...
Who are the harem members? Also, why would we leave questions under someone else's review? It's way too easy for you to miss them then. There is no difference between posting them here and under someone else's review.
DaoistDlL6M5:No. Events will be changed too much by then. And please leave your comments under the review of TypeFantasyHeart.
um so sas there is harem, the premise is heccin amazing 😭😭😭
Ye Ziyun, Xiao Ning'er, Yang Xin (possibly), Ying Yueru, Yu Yan(possibly). As for commenting under the review of fantasyheart, if I want to add to my review I don't want it to be far below other comments.
BreezyNovels:Who are the harem members? Also, why would we leave questions under someone else's review? It's way too easy for you to miss them then. There is no difference between posting them here and under someone else's review.
no i don't think so as at the early stages of the story there are already deviations from the cannon part and I assure you MC doesn't have the typical Chinese "young master" vibe from the cannon.
Mental:will it be the same as the og ? Nie li goes back in time, only for him to bully kids, gets his father in law killed, sends his girl/s to a different sect not knowing what could happen, his former 'teacher' sacrifices herself again while he's bullying a little girl ? and be oblivious to everything that's happening,...
Is these dropped i hope 😭 not
Hey there Author-san...any possibility of an update on your story?... this was a really really good work... ...sooo...Hope to see you again
are you alive please confirm 🥺🥺
