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DarkNoobWriter11
DarkNoobWriter11Lv102yr
2022-06-07 04:27

Well, its a good story but for me its just too much things invented, i can understand all cell phones, the walkietalkies but camon ghost hunting for several chaps just for one mansion the he bought?...Nah too much.

TDG: Reincarnated and transmigrated

DaoistDlL6M5
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DaoistDlL6M5
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It should have been a date with a touch of mystery, but I got a bit carried away. I didn't expect it to last almost ten chapters. But I think the rewards, in the end, were worth the trouble. I am trying to avoid such AU archs now.

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DaoistDlL6M5
DaoistDlL6M5Author

Someone advised me to write my own review to explain things that I couldn't include in a synopsis. So here we go. 1. English isn't the author's first or second language so there are some mistakes. And the author will be grateful if you point them out to him. 2. Pacing is slow. There are new OCs introduced, and some world background added. And Author tries to follow the rule 'show, don't tell' as much as his writing skills allow him to. 3. The story concentrates on cultivation and kingdom building mostly so it may get a bit boring. 4. Author tries to fill the plot holes of the original as much as he can and tries to make every development as logical as possible. All of the cheats MC gets will follow the rules of the world. So there will be no system or other otherworldly powers. 5. Events will part ways with canon the further it goes. So it will be a completely different story from canon if the author will be able to finish it.

2yr

TypeFantasyHeart_5657
TypeFantasyHeart_5657Lv1

I have never seen a FF where nie lie is the protagonist and thanks to the earth knowledge he got by absorbing that poor dude he changed his stupid mindset and now plans ahead properly!. Also, dont take 10000 chapters to bed the girls and give us a juicy chapter

2yr
Achilles_Bahadur
Achilles_BahadurLv4

this is so good. a new nie lie. no reckless nie lie. don't drop. keep it up author. this is so good. a new nie lie. no reckless nie lie. don't drop. keep it up author.

2yr
Jr_DemonGod
Jr_DemonGodLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Simp ni lie , ew [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

2yr
Ezzaldien_s
Ezzaldien_sLv3

more more more more more more momore more more more more more more more more more more more re more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

2yr
lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv3

Loved it, this is by far one of the best TDG novel on this novel. Mc is smart enough to not just offend everyone like in original. and author made even the reaction of enemies realistic like sacred family not just start sending assassins after him just because he offended that shen boy. Overall loved the take on the story and this is actually the first time i am reading a novel where a original nie lie have modern knowledge rather than a modern person with nie lie's knowledge.

2yr
8Mysterious8
8Mysterious8Lv4

Simp ni lie .................................................................... ....................................................................

2yr
Blue_Bird_0758
Blue_Bird_0758Lv4

man This is the best TDAG fanfiction o readed so far.... keep it up author i realy liked your this fanfic story and style. just your update is slow. so plz updated chapter more 🤗

2yr
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