The Most Perfect "The Last Airbender" Fanfic That I Have Ever Read, such clarity & schemes, though world building is missing, along with drama, still it is the best fanfic I have read so far. Kudos To The Writer 😍🤩😍

It's a really good fic. Pacing, plot, Mc, writing... The only fault it has is its inconsistencies with numbers and leveling up. I would advice the author to change the system for any future projects and make it similar to "the dark wolf shiro"s newer works wherein abilities/traits are set in stone and not defined by numbers.

Rare Fanfiction of "ATLA" and even a good one what do you want more? In my opinion author checks on all points, The author handles the perfect balance to write an original story but still having the canon as a world background. These aspect of his/her fanfiction makes it very interesting to read bc it gives a kinda "small" world in the anime a bigger setting, As for Stability of Updates author may doesnt update as fast as other authors tho thats not the point in "stability". Also until now author also seems to continue on even tho RL issues are there hard to find here as of most ff get sadly dropped when RL happens. All in All its a great fanfiction and I hope to read more of it.

Excellent as of eight chapters being out and certainly worth following. My only complaint is that the protagonist could be a tad bit smarter and recognize the capability of his system more and value of grinding a bunch of skills to level 20 for the stats. The only major thing wrong is the protagonist somehow thinks Suki, who is mid at best, is hotter than Ty Lee!

I tried to endure it, but the character design for MC is really not good. in no way would he have survived with all the stupid things he keeps doing, and his personality is complete garbage.

Work of a kid about a 'mature' man, yeah pretty much explains it.

Writing quality - meh Updating stability - above average Story development - ……did you have that? Seemed very loose and aimless with a generic “get stronger” drive. Character Design - garbage Genji sucks. Annoying and terrible planning World background - your system is terrible and exposed minimal knowledge of the world’s power levels

It's from mlt not because it feels like a Chinese novel, frogs and wells, and the fact that katara blushes as she blushes for her sworn enemy the fire nation if they saw the program they know that if they harm their loved ones she is a capable murderous psychopath whatever it is, it's not being a hater it's just that chinese fanfic novels glorify their protagonist and despise the main cast that is not a woman who will end up with the protagonist

MC is against sexists, what a good simp. I suspect that the author is a feminist woman or is in a relationship with someone who is a feminist and/or a socialist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

well, I am not gonna lie, this novel has immense potential, but the past 10 or so chapters have been less then desirable. The Mc seems to have regressed inside of progressing, he seems to have lost his edge and is not making best of decisions. I used to enjoy reading this, like a lot but now it doesn't feel the same, the starting chapters are great, but at current pace the story is going towards its ruin, and the author also doesn't seem to be taking any criticism or he just flat out ignores the comments, many people seem to have been voicing their but have been ignored, so I don't think that he plans to improve, so I would say that read it casually, but don't get invested into it, you might get disappointed.