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Thanks for chapter and more chapter please

It is the egg that Valka took at the end, at the end it was seen that Drago had a plan B in case he didn't get it and I suppose the adult died or the egg was simply forgotten and the one we see in the movie is the one that killed Johan

So, are they biological, or how does something that seems magical and doesn't use mana work? I'll let you know if it's magical because it is magic, but if it's innate, what makes a person turn into a fish? And then what happens with objects like the shell, the magic bag you just gave him this chapter, the ring, etc. They are all magic objects and in some you even say that they are magical, so how does that work?

OK then why try to get the alpha's son for Drago, why not keep him to regain his power and influence, we all saw what a dragon like that did on its own and add to that the knowledge he has as a dragon slayer?

Does the abilities he has use magic? That he couldn't use magic because of the potion he used or any magical device? Why would they banish him if a wizard is so valuable then? The joke is that Toothless is the last Night Fury because there is another one? Why would Viggo give a Night Fury when Drago could have it or did you forget that Viggo is Drago's subordinate? Weren't the competitors for Merida's hand the sons of the chiefs only because if those are their greatest warriors then they would have been dead long ago? There are too many plot holes that you keep leaving

I'll tell you a reality that will hurt you but we all and I mean ALL know referring to what the novel you're talking about is a cultivation one, Chinese novels are not "popular" for their complex stories or anything like that, we only read them because we saw the manhua and we want to see what will happen to our favorite waifu or we have a fetish with glorifying protagonists without sense, these are filled with plot holes and unnecessary forces that make the reader leave them mostly or simply read each chapter out of the corner of their eye, add the use of a system that takes away the emotion from the story, think that the system should either be nerfed when you use it in a story or it should only have the most basic, seriously we all saw only leveling and we think it will turn out well to add a system and then not know what to write because the system breaks the plot being a very big oversight. And one last thing, in Game of Thrones the author spent almost his entire life creating and setting the world for the story

Look, I really don't care if it's a hole or if I didn't like it, but I think you don't understand people's perspective when they tell you this, imagine if Spider-Man out of nowhere receives a bullet from him that has nothing special about it other than it's a bullet, that's what people complain about. I liked your story, this is 8 out of 10, it highlighted that I don't mind the plot hole but as a reader I feel the need to clarify this for my fellow readers what you do next with this will be at your discretion

Congratulations China, you make even the hornedus look and be garbage, this character fills me with all kinds of emotions but not those of a happy reader, trying to glorify a guy who is angry for not having sex with a girl who doesn't see him that way is low even for Turkish novels

The story is going well and at least I only consider the part where Kaito Kid started talking like some Chinese protagonist, something bad about the story but in general it's going well, there aren't usually many worm fics and even less on these sites and I liked seeing one.

Thanks for chapter