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2022-10-11 08:27

It's a really good fic. Pacing, plot, Mc, writing... The only fault it has is its inconsistencies with numbers and leveling up. I would advice the author to change the system for any future projects and make it similar to "the dark wolf shiro"s newer works wherein abilities/traits are set in stone and not defined by numbers.

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Sinning_Sovereign
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THANKS! Having trouble with numbers because I have it all on a separate paper and updating constantly isn’t a very good point for me.

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