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2022-09-05 08:26

Alright, let me start by saying this novel has an amazing start, super great start and the MC reacts reasonably to being dropped into a totally unkown world. For the first two worlds he's doing things perfectly in my eyes, improving himself, bettering himself, and becoming smarter, stronger, and overall just superior with each passing chapter. The MC thinks head and is prepared for almost everything. Here comes the absolutely MASSIVE problem though. The author nerfs him CONSTANTLY. I don't know what kind of Crack the author is smoking, but every time the MC finishes becoming more OP, he's nerfed. At the end of Volume 5 he's reset COMPLETELY to 0. For absolutely no reason at all. I get that it may come into play during the final volume and all, but nerfing him after every single volume is annoying beyond belief. It's a waste of time knowing that even if the MC works hard for 200 years he's just going to lose literally everything. And Volume 6 feels weird to me. I don't know how to describe it but it feels distinctly different from every other Volume, which isn't explicitly bad, but I personally don't really like it when the feel of a novel changes. Update stability is great, author may be mentally deranged but atleast he's consistent, character design could use some work, it feels like the MC is bipolar at times. Writing quality is pretty Inconsistent, the beginning feels outstanding, total 10/10 but after Volume 5 drops to around a 5-6/10. Story development is terrible, MC advances 10 steps only to go back 40. The novel isn't bad by any means, but the author seems like he doesn't know where he wants to take the novel, and so he's constantly having to shift and change the MC's power to compensate for the fact that he made him too OP at the start. My advice would be to just rewrite it, make the MC advance slower, and stop nerfing him constantly, the first 2 times weren't that annoying, but him being totally reset really set me off. Overall Rating: 5/5 for the first 4 Volumes. 2/5 for everything after.

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Dark_Crow_Dao
Dark_Crow_DaoLv14

Thank you for your review.

OLB
OLBLv3

eu já tinha preconceito só pela capa e pelo título da fanfic, parece que eu não estava errado.

Potatowned
PotatownedLv14

Thanks for the review. Not wasting my time on an MC that's going to get constantly nerfed.

Moist_BedBugs
Moist_BedBugsLv4

The mc was so cringe in that arc. "dada" "kun" "chan" being repeated every three godamn sentences almost made me go mad

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