OLB

I thought he would see the current Voldemort as a child trying to play king, but seeing the MC now, I'm starting to doubt his capabilities.

I'm not saying the fic is bad, just that the MC's personality sometimes seems out of sync with the moment.

It gets to a point where the MC's playful personality becomes embarrassing and uncomfortable to read, So I THINK you could better dose the MC's "jokes", not at all times like now, where it should be a delicate moment for Logan

You posted the same chapter twice in one

Water Tentacles - Attack, Defense, Containment

Use the concept of Rasengan and make the water inside rotate in layers clockwise and counterclockwise like a crusher.

If it keeps compressing...

Yes, it's a great fanfic. The wind jutsus are good enough to not make me angry 😂

I don't know how to make assessments. I just like everything .................................................................................