Moist_BedBugs

HANK!!! DON'T ABBREVIATE CREDIT POINTS! HANK!!!!

No wonder dude is angry. I would be angry too. System took him away from his good life and threw him into a fuckin cultivation world

probably kg. Like, I'm taller than most people in my country but I'm around 55.

First Chapter: Horrifically mid. Very basic transmigration scene. Second Chapter: An MC with even an iota of common sense? Impossible! But it's a good thing. Also just filler. Third Chapter: Filler Fourth Chapter: Cliffhanger + Filler. (I don't get how this guy writes 2000 words where absolutely nothing happens) I haven't read on from this point because I lost interest but I'll give it a shot again tomorrow and hope the awakening ceremony pays off. Solid 3.4/5

I'm definitely a totally original author and not copying SuperNerd's review format. Writing Quality 4/5 : Compared to the other RI fanfics I feel that it's decently well written. I could definitely improve on the first person chapters and make a happy one for once but I probably won't. i.e. every first person chapter is gonna be a tragedy. Update Stability 4/5: I upload frequently unless it's exam season but I don't upload daily or anything like White Shadow. Character Design 5/5: I design my characters decently well, I think. I haven't shown it off much as I write this review but I hope I can in the future. World Background 5/5: It's RI man, what do you expect? Story Development 3.75-4/5: Yeah, this is the aspect I need to improve. Like, I've got some REALLY cool stuff planned out but it's a bit difficult in terms of execution.

Nope. Just overwhelmed with emotions after he escaped slavery and all. He'll calm down in a while, his personality will still remain the same.

Naturally there will be new wind path gu but variant humans, I'm not sure. i would need to make a legends of Ren Zhu chapter about them to add them to the story

He will likely stick with wind path till the end of the story. Although, I might go back on it if I decide something else.

This fanfic is the "original version", my rewrite of this fanfic would be mentioned in the "updates" channel of the discord server, and it's pinned in the channel under the name of my fic

Hey! I needed to write this chapter to prepare for another important Legend Of Ren Zhu episode!