Story has a great start but from academy ark it became really boring, mc just a side character, he has less screen time from either one of his friends and enemies, i'm currently at chapter 206 and i can't read it further. From what i see he would be a side character, or one of many mc in his own slice of life story. Why i think so? because he wants to travel with his friends in the future. So if you like story with several mc's, you would like this story, if not it would be boring and a waste of time. It has a great start though, i really liked it.
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LIKEI was developing things and trying out different ways to write. This is my first novel and it's inevitable that this'll happen. Anywho, I am glad you like it and if you read further, you'll see just the MC's slice of life. Have a good day :)
ByteZeroOne:But it sure doesn't feel like. There is no his slice of life, there is only his friends adventures and side characters(206 chaps)
So he wouldn't travel with them?
SocialHippo:I was developing things and trying out different ways to write. This is my first novel and it's inevitable that this'll happen. Anywho, I am glad you like it and if you read further, you'll see just the MC's slice of life. Have a good day :)
I don't understand how it's linked, but i will try i guess, i hope i will have enough willpower to read through tournament, it is really boring to read about his friends and others... I really hope that if you would write about others in the future, it would be his girls and not some dudes whom no one cares about, lol
SocialHippo:It's a slice of life of the son of God. Of course he would do such things due to that. Also, I'd recommend reading ahead as you'd get a better picture of the entire situation :)
I agree with u but it's a fun and light read.
ByteZeroOne:I don't understand how it's linked, but i will try i guess, i hope i will have enough willpower to read through tournament, it is really boring to read about his friends and others... I really hope that if you would write about others in the future, it would be his girls and not some dudes whom no one cares about, lol