the whole people don't die thing was a bad gimmick cuz it only comes to bite the mc. while Liam the delusional is able to kill someone day one of his reincarnation. at about 170 I realize that the author lost the plot. Liam and Lucas get so much screen time it's become there story and lith is just an observer. I don't like skipping parts of stories but the author literally put 2 chess games back to back. again Liam and Lucas are getting to much screen time and Liam should be dead by now. I can't honestly keep reading this woth how little of a role the mc plays in his own story.
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LIKEI am sorry the story disappointed you. Me writing the chess game wasn't a filler, but the actual content related to the main theme of this book. This book has a main theme, which is slice of life, and chess game is a part of it. Same with other chapters like surfing the internet and other things. Liam and Lucas had to be given a bit of screentime for plot purposes and going ahead, they get little to not screentime and it's just Lith doing his things. Anywho, I'd like to thankyou firstly for being kind enough to read this much and support me in this endeavour. I truly thank you from the bottom of my heart. Things aren't perfect and there are some problems with the story and the plot, I don't disagree with you on that. I am learning and trying to improve with those things. Your review is one valuable piece of advice for me and I'll gladly take into consideration with the things you mentioned. Once again, thankyou for taking your time and reading, commenting, as well as reviewing, I truly appreciate it. I hope to see you again someday, preferably in better terms. Much love.
I'm likely to return as there aren't that many flaws for me and I have you to see you the author treat any comments negatively. I just need a break for a bit
SocialHippo:I am sorry the story disappointed you. Me writing the chess game wasn't a filler, but the actual content related to the main theme of this book. This book has a main theme, which is slice of life, and chess game is a part of it. Same with other chapters like surfing the internet and other things. Liam and Lucas had to be given a bit of screentime for plot purposes and going ahead, they get little to not screentime and it's just Lith doing his things. Anywho, I'd like to thankyou firstly for being kind enough to read this much and support me in this endeavour. I truly thank you from the bottom of my heart. Things aren't perfect and there are some problems with the story and the plot, I don't disagree with you on that. I am learning and trying to improve with those things. Your review is one valuable piece of advice for me and I'll gladly take into consideration with the things you mentioned. Once again, thankyou for taking your time and reading, commenting, as well as reviewing, I truly appreciate it. I hope to see you again someday, preferably in better terms. Much love.