DeadSoil

What could have happened: In 200 chapters, the protagonist could have easily formed a harem with at least a hundred women, cultivated up to the empyrean realm, killed all enemies, and had some leisure time before going to the next map. What happened: The protagonist dragged on dozens of chapters to have sex with one woman or another for absolutely no reason, let enemies escape only for them to come back and cause more problems, and still behaves arrogantly instead of using his brain. MC: 'I can see you naked and do various things with your body, but I won't take your virginity because I want to be stronger.' MC: 'Doing everything except sex is acceptable because I don't know you well enough.'" wasted too many coins os this shit.

Positive points: Fast progress The protagonist quickly adapts to the situation and it doesn't take hundreds of chapters. The R-18 scenes are good and not too detailed or boring. Negative points: Although there is a time skip, I can't help but feel that everything still seems too childish and it would require hundreds or thousands of years of time skip. It doesn't make sense for the protagonist to be the sin of lust and only have a few wives and not have sex with anyone else, especially since the wives can decide with whom he has sex. This is just a beta protagonist from Japan. Personally, I don't like childishness, and adding a child who only throws tantrums and doesn't show any gratitude or courtesy towards the protagonist is unnecessary. The reality of the child and her mother before the protagonist was one of 100% humiliation and death, and yet I have to read about a retarded child who doesn't feel gratitude or respect for anything and throws tantrums when she doesn't get what she wants.

MC ( ) no brain ( ) trash ( ) barely out of trash level (x) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... HAREM ( ) no brain ( ) trash ( ) barely out of trash level (x) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Writing Quality ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Stability of Updates ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Story Development ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Character Design ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... World Background ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Obs : It seems that one of the characters was forgotten by the author. ( Ai Fang from the Yang-Yin sect)

I wasted my time reading 59 chapters... probably one of the worst novels I've had the displeasure of reading. in short: the protagonist who appears in the first chapter is totally different from the one who appears in the following chapters and to make the things worse his decisions become increasingly stupid and without logical sense.

This novel has several problems and most of them come from the fact that the protagonist keeps the memories of the past life. after reading about 200 chapters I can say that the author has no idea what he was doing and seems to have gotten lost. the fact that the protagonist has the memories of his past life, did nothing but make him weaker mentally and a person who seems to be bound by the laws and cultures of his past life, I didn't see any benefits from having the memories of the previous life. and that only made him pathetic. all this just to spend hundreds of chapters for "evolution" of the protagonist.

thanks for the review. I certainly won't waste my time with this novel.

yes I understand that you are new and still learning, but think about the following situation, do you really think that the moral values ​​here on earth are the same as those on other planets? even if it's the same race it doesn't make sense, because the situation they live in is totally different from ours, their story is also different, so how can it be the same? calling the mc beta is because the mc can seduce women without doing anything just for the pheromones, but still act like a child, the only thing i expect from the mc who spent so much time in the forest surviving is that he act mature .

I don't doubt that something like : you must marry my disciple to pay your father's debt. quite possible that it happens.

I really wish the author had chosen the patr... instead of signing with the webnovel , because they limit the novel a lot in many things. as I said in my Review, this novel is good and consistent, but these cliche things like dueling or social status, it really sucks and just do what other thousands of novels already do. and as the novel has a harem in the tag , I hope the author chooses the members wisely , this crazy woman who wants to duel with him , just because of something so stupid ... characters like that better avoid because they only bring problems.

about the sister was a flashback? it was very difficult to understand... and what exactly happened to the sister?