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dual cultivation-REMASTERED(Volume 1)✅️Character description(Not longer than Paragraph)✅️R-18 scenes-Good few chapters for 1st intimacy ✅️(but many chapters for normal DC sessions-too many R-18 scenes in succession gets tiring)Fights- The action is interesting same with the plot✅️(plot is slow paced due to H-scenes)Mc- ruthless✅️( but should try not to think with his D and maybe get rejected once or twice i think)writing quality-10/10✅️Overall a good read-highly recommended
thanks I was starting to get skeptical seeing how mc was so carefree,with a mindset that he just want to have fun in this life,for Godsake he's the demon prince he's father has titles of mass murderer...probably has mass enemies also so was expecting some action not a slice of life plot where mc just enjoys life
what's this now? off track are we?
I nearly read "didn't I die because of truck-kun" hehe
same,anime had started to feel like cartoons ever since I've started reading novels.only the 19s anime keeps me interested.
she's too attached to him to call it a normal motherly love,so add her
how refreshing [img=update]
haha how nostalgic
then why not mention the fact that he's not freaked out by the apocalypse and just easily accepted it and the fact that he saw his classmate being eaten alive and that he's friend turned to a zombie trying to kill him(he wasn't even sad or scared).thus I label such character as naivehehe but it's alright
she should have addressed the problem first not outright break up with himmom how can you break up with someone who's trying to make themselves better by going to the gym hehe I'm sure if he got fat she'll break up with him
1st volumecharactermc is op but it feels like he's a side character.he lacks character/maturity(it feels like he's weak).he questions everything.No character development even after getting massive plot armor/his mission practically no change in mindset.serena(his summoner) really feels like a summoner with no character,she doesn't have the aura of the main heroine(doesn't spent most of the time with mc)much like the mc.in simple terms their characters needsplotmc spent 10 yrs studying but it yielded no results as he utterly failed at his first deal(quite disappointing).Mc past memories haven't resurfaced.mc stats were upgraded to rank A but it stills feels weird as he spent a day to upgrade his first skill from rank f-c,but takes 10 yrs to upgrade most of his skills to rank A/B. he's group oriented.still not used to blood/death but he killed the goblins.(he freaks out too much).still not at school while he's 18yr old.overall the 10 yr time skip crucified the mc development stage(encounters,battles,leveling,academics,romance,maturity etc)well I'm hoping for volume 2 there's change
only at ch3 but decided to prematurely write this review1st the mc mental breakdown after knowing his death(Fresh new element most novels lack it shows mc is a person and has emotions) 2nd hehe system knows about the state the mc's parents are in and everything going on in his prior world whilst in brand new world(kinda hilarious I like it)it has potential....until next review