Item: Demonic System In Naruto
Rating: 3
Author: Florian1990

Florian1990Lv152yr

2022-02-05 19:51

Dear Author, I dont waste my time on reviews before an Author has at least 30 chapters and at least some release stability. Why should i analyze your writing style if there is no stuff to analyze? 4 chapters aren't enough for that. I will write an real review if you reach 30 chapters in lets say 2-3 months time.

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