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ALiVe
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2022-02-05 11:47

MAKE SURE THAT IF YOU READ IT, THAT YOU REVIEW IT SO AUTHOR WON'T DROP! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . And have a great day!

Demonic System In Naruto

MaliceGod
4.4
4 Chs

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ALiVe
ALiVeLv12

IT'S REALLY GOOD BTW AUTHOR, I really like it. The grammar is very good. The writing and emotions are displayed well. Despite the slight language barrier, you're articulate with your words,providing good imagery to work with. And the story line seems to be going well. Just based off of the three chapters here I can tell that you won't give the MC EVERYTHING he wants and he will have us and downs. Therefore you have created a PERFECT character to read about. Pls keep 7p the good work.

2yr
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ALiVe
ALiVeLv12

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ALiVe:IT'S REALLY GOOD BTW AUTHOR, I really like it. The grammar is very good. The writing and emotions are displayed well. Despite the slight language barrier, you're articulate with your words,providing good imagery to work with. And the story line seems to be going well. Just based off of the three chapters here I can tell that you won't give the MC EVERYTHING he wants and he will have us and downs. Therefore you have created a PERFECT character to read about. Pls keep 7p the good work.
2yr
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ALiVe
ALiVeLv12

up*

ALiVe:IT'S REALLY GOOD BTW AUTHOR, I really like it. The grammar is very good. The writing and emotions are displayed well. Despite the slight language barrier, you're articulate with your words,providing good imagery to work with. And the story line seems to be going well. Just based off of the three chapters here I can tell that you won't give the MC EVERYTHING he wants and he will have us and downs. Therefore you have created a PERFECT character to read about. Pls keep 7p the good work.
2yr
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Great start and has huge potential. A must read and i promise u won’t regret it. The only thing i have a problem with so far is the update is too slow. You should update more as i’m looking forward to what mc will become in the future and what decisions he will make. Since there is a romance tag i hope it will be Kaguya if mc isn’t traveling to other worlds. Would prefer a small harem of 2-3. Worlds and girls suggestions : Arifureta : Yue DBZ (After winning the tourney he uses the super drag balls to wish for his fam’s revival if he hasn’t done so yet)

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There many out there with similar types in the genre but so far this is definitely one of the ones I have liked the best. I really want to see where this story goes.

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Mirio_kun
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I am curious about few things. Why did you give him such op ability, item? Are you planning to nerf him to continue the story? Are you going to even go past 10 chapters? Most of the fic I read like this gets dropped very fast, if it's not Chinese that is. Why is he smiling in front of Hokage, Even after his parents death? It will look very suspicious. And if the Hokage let the Uchiha clan get massacred why would he save him, instead of killing him? After all you are showing a different third Hokage from canon.

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Florian1990
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Dear Author, I dont waste my time on reviews before an Author has at least 30 chapters and at least some release stability. Why should i analyze your writing style if there is no stuff to analyze? 4 chapters aren't enough for that. I will write an real review if you reach 30 chapters in lets say 2-3 months time.

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