Florian1990

god damn Cliffhanger!

the Story is pretty fine to this point. i have read truely shitty stories. Yes you arent on the Level of an real Author that lives from his work. But talentless you are not.

i would love both of them trolling Jiraiya whenever he is in Konoha or meet him outside. That would be funny.

Well hard question. one point of concern is the length of the chapters and how interesting the part of the Story is that is covered. I would say anywhere between 10-30 chapters.

thanks for the chapter. bit i wosh there were more.😅

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Alles schick und bei dir?

oh hallo mein Landsmann/Frau Schön auch mal einen Deutschen Author zu sehen.^^

Well counting is hard for some people 😜