Great start and has huge potential. A must read and i promise u won’t regret it. The only thing i have a problem with so far is the update is too slow. You should update more as i’m looking forward to what mc will become in the future and what decisions he will make. Since there is a romance tag i hope it will be Kaguya if mc isn’t traveling to other worlds. Would prefer a small harem of 2-3. Worlds and girls suggestions : Arifureta : Yue DBZ (After winning the tourney he uses the super drag balls to wish for his fam’s revival if he hasn’t done so yet)
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LIKEFor his MS i recommend not having an ability that’ll have anything to do with strength like amaterasu or 50% increase in jutsu power. Suggestions: [Teleport] : Depending on chakra used, he can teleport to anywhere. The further the distance, the more chakra needed. [Rewind] : You can set the ability to activate anytime u want and it will rewind yourself ? mins/hours back in time. For example, u set the [Rewind] to activate when u die to return yourself ? mins/hours back. [Perfect clone] : Creates a perfect clone of you. Depending on the number of clones your power will be divided but u can have however much you want in each clone and anything the clone learns or gains, will be absorbed back by you after absorbing the clone back. Clone is an exact replica of you. [Transfer] : You can transfer anything that’s you have to whoever you choose. For example if you are poisoned, u can transfer it to someone else. You can also transfer any power you have or your sharingan. [Tsukuyomi] [Slave?] Make someone your slave? You can force him to do anything you want.
