This book is great one of the better Necormancer stories I’ve read on this site keep up the awesome work auther you have me hooked [img=update]

It is so great. it has long chapters, but those chapter go by in a flash, it makes sense, and you just have jun. A great story I feel as if you could say he is a professional

A great book in general. great grammar and storytelling. plus the main character isn't all that bad. he's intelligent but not a know it all, and he's got a consistent personality. it's a little rough in the beginning but once you get past chapter five you'll be hooked. a great read. just wish I could have more chapter. Aslo if the author wants I can help with avoiding tropes that make it boring. and using writing to your advantage. you've done a great job already. just don't want this to fall into mediocrity.

It’s a decent book however you start paying for the chapters before you can really decide if it’s worth your money, the cost per chapter is more than other books out there, and there are several chapters that may be kind of interesting but really are not pertinent to the over all story. I know writers on here are trying to make money and do not begrudge them that but sometimes it feels more like that’s all the book is about and not about writing a great story.

In terms of story quality it’s great very enjoyable, a unique take on necromancy however the paywall comes far too soon I am really enjoying reading but at this point I’m not hooked enough to want to pay tbh. I do appreciate the authors note so I understand you regret it and cannot change it but when it comes to my limited funds 17 chapters is sadly not enough to make me want to invest.

It's pretty good for someone who likes a necromancer to be a hero but it's not my cup of tea Mc seems to be too good for his own good he doesn't even asks a question following the commands without a thought And I read more then 50 chapters and now I can say it was waste of time and money Not for me

Everyone who reads past the paywall gives a 5 star and begs for more chapters, everyone who doesn't gives a low rating. The duality is kinda funny. Author made an accident setting paywall early because they're a novice, but the book is excellent, and they have started giving out two free chapters per month because of all the hate. The book deserves a 4.9 star rating because of the story itself.

Early paywall, plain story, not worth the money. Protagonist basically OP despite having a mage class and things kinda just fall into his lap. If I wanted this quality I'd go to a free site.

Why does it say completed? Did the author drop? There is no way this should be done with how far the story is. This is sad.