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trey_tuckerLv13yr
2022-02-14 23:49

A great book in general. great grammar and storytelling. plus the main character isn't all that bad. he's intelligent but not a know it all, and he's got a consistent personality. it's a little rough in the beginning but once you get past chapter five you'll be hooked. a great read. just wish I could have more chapter. Aslo if the author wants I can help with avoiding tropes that make it boring. and using writing to your advantage. you've done a great job already. just don't want this to fall into mediocrity.

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Aero182Lv13

Thanks! It's my first novel so the first 5 are a little rough. I've went back and edited them a few times as I've become better at writing. I appreciate the well-thought-out review

Aero182Lv13

*3 months later: I did it again. Now I am working through the whole book, currently up to chapter 6: Cull

Aero182:Thanks! It's my first novel so the first 5 are a little rough. I've went back and edited them a few times as I've become better at writing. I appreciate the well-thought-out review
Ali_Nawaz_1634Lv1

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MonomangaLv15

*Pst* can you tell me if you are continuing the book? Pretty please?

Aero182:*3 months later: I did it again. Now I am working through the whole book, currently up to chapter 6: Cull
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