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Yokashi
YokashiLv22yr
2022-11-23 06:44

very disappointed, shadow slave has an amazing start and the main character we are introduced to is a cunning, smart person that doesn't even hestitate to poisen seemingly "innocent" people for his safety, paired with good side characters and an interesting world it would seem like it's going to be great, right? wrong. Everything you've just read gets thrown away and wasted, the main character isn't cunning (you can be cunning without lying), smart or anything anymore. Character development is random and when it's announced to happen ("beach" episode) doesn't happen and overall Sunny disappoints in every aspect. you would think that he fights against the spell and avoid being a slave? nope, he becomes the slave of someone and that's it.. he's a slave, the novel lost its uniqueness at that point and I dropped it after trying to read further, spoiler; it doesn't get better.

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lamperouge
lamperougeLv14

I think it got more interesting after becoming a slave

v_nolan
v_nolanLv1

I agree. it is even worse when not only forgiving the blind girl but feeling guilty for hurting her feeling after she literally enslaved him. It is like the author changed.

v_nolan
v_nolanLv1

you think wrong.

lamperouge:I think it got more interesting after becoming a slave
GilesCorey666
GilesCorey666Lv1

Wait a minute, he forgave Cassie? I stopped reading to wait a few hundred chapters, did he start simping that hard?

Salamin
SalaminLv5

How many episodes does the flashback last?

David_Kaus_7815
David_Kaus_7815Lv2

He has not forgiven her yet. But he's fighting with his need for companionship and being understood so its probable he will do so partially.

GilesCorey666:Wait a minute, he forgave Cassie? I stopped reading to wait a few hundred chapters, did he start simping that hard?
Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv4

nope, I am 1200 chapters in and it gets worse 🙃

lamperouge:I think it got more interesting after becoming a slave
Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv4

now he is an actual slave both in a sexual, physical and mental manner

GilesCorey666:Wait a minute, he forgave Cassie? I stopped reading to wait a few hundred chapters, did he start simping that hard?
wizard_dark
wizard_darkLv3

explain please

Everythingonurmind:now he is an actual slave both in a sexual, physical and mental manner
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FieryBaldachin
FieryBaldachinLv2

He's lying!

wizard_dark:explain please
JustSmileAndWave
JustSmileAndWaveLv3

Bad review. Reviewer fails to understand that you can still be cunning while not completely unfeeling, and understand where the character development gets its direction. Over time, Sunny finds more things that matter to him, and therefore is more restricted in what he does. Honestly, wanting a main character that just manipulates everybody and doesn't have any loved ones is kinda sad. Also, Sunny knew the seemingly innocent people weren't.(Sunny is also still fighting against the spell and his fate as a slave. It's not that easy to destroy an almost omnipotent being, and he doesn't want to kill Nephis.)

John1500
John1500Lv1

It depends on the background. Remember he lived as basically good-for-nothing orphan in the slums and survive there. Sure the author don't described his background in detail but we know that his parents perished as worker and i expect he has it worse as orphaned child. In the first nightmare he thought the "Visions" are real people and still kill them in a cold manner. If it's a modern MC probably with some abuse longing for love it would be another thing but his cunning thinking proceed e.g. questioning Nephis why helping some dead weight and risking her life (it's in the early time where Cassie don't show any usefulness, other than her memory and they could torture her taking all her memories and/or using her as bait cause she's blind cant escape or fight). He only need Nephis as strong fighter cause he's weak in the beginning and only as long as he has 0% chance to survive. Remember his flaw that can make him easily enslaved from the first guy asking for his true name so every conversation has potential to make him enslaved so why bother with it and risk his freedom. And the enslavement is no System giving him some buffs it's just he must follow commands and he know how cruel humans can be and it's not far fetched imagining him being a disposable foot soldier. Sure it's easier to survive as group and knowing his flaw, it would be cunning to be not part of the spotlight and just some random fighter with average power and not a officer. So the problem is the character development and the path from killing people in cold blood, rank people from their usefulness to be a caring MC risking his life for other, it's a jump not a progression and revelation of his changing mindset.

JustSmileAndWave:Bad review. Reviewer fails to understand that you can still be cunning while not completely unfeeling, and understand where the character development gets its direction. Over time, Sunny finds more things that matter to him, and therefore is more restricted in what he does. Honestly, wanting a main character that just manipulates everybody and doesn't have any loved ones is kinda sad. Also, Sunny knew the seemingly innocent people weren't.(Sunny is also still fighting against the spell and his fate as a slave. It's not that easy to destroy an almost omnipotent being, and he doesn't want to kill Nephis.)
Isaiah_Tevin_1055
Isaiah_Tevin_1055Lv2

Arr you mentally fi

v_nolan:I agree. it is even worse when not only forgiving the blind girl but feeling guilty for hurting her feeling after she literally enslaved him. It is like the author changed.
JiuChen
JiuChenLv3

He didn't

GilesCorey666:Wait a minute, he forgave Cassie? I stopped reading to wait a few hundred chapters, did he start simping that hard?
Rahul_Verma_9515
Rahul_Verma_9515Lv12

You are definitely a girl. You will enjoy this novel i think coz you will like a guy like Sunny (slave of darling). Hell the author herself also might be a girl/woman with this fetish.

JustSmileAndWave:Bad review. Reviewer fails to understand that you can still be cunning while not completely unfeeling, and understand where the character development gets its direction. Over time, Sunny finds more things that matter to him, and therefore is more restricted in what he does. Honestly, wanting a main character that just manipulates everybody and doesn't have any loved ones is kinda sad. Also, Sunny knew the seemingly innocent people weren't.(Sunny is also still fighting against the spell and his fate as a slave. It's not that easy to destroy an almost omnipotent being, and he doesn't want to kill Nephis.)
Rahul_Verma_9515
Rahul_Verma_9515Lv12

There are 39 others who are mentally ill with him bro while you alone are sane. You must be feeling very special right?

Isaiah_Tevin_1055:Arr you mentally fi
castrix
castrixLv14

he forgive cassie then cassie used sunny to avoid her death since she already saw her death at the end of vol 2. cassie is more cunning than sunny, she is better mc than him, while sunny is just getting dumber

GilesCorey666:Wait a minute, he forgave Cassie? I stopped reading to wait a few hundred chapters, did he start simping that hard?
Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

dude who cares if she's a girl now as for cassie she's a prophet and let me assure you prohets are scary as fuck they would do the weirdest shit ever and it would help you like crazy i mean what cassie did helped sunny from becoming modreds slave(i doubt she knew this but who's stopping me from lying to these noobs) sunny might hate her but he still loves her (not romantic) love is a complex emotion

Rahul_Verma_9515:You are definitely a girl. You will enjoy this novel i think coz you will like a guy like Sunny (slave of darling). Hell the author herself also might be a girl/woman with this fetish.
Rahul_Verma_9515
Rahul_Verma_9515Lv12

What are you talking about? Did you even understand what I was talking there? Let me explain for you I am saying that this novel will be mostly liked by feminist or by girls/women only.

Original_Eternal:dude who cares if she's a girl now as for cassie she's a prophet and let me assure you prohets are scary as fuck they would do the weirdest shit ever and it would help you like crazy i mean what cassie did helped sunny from becoming modreds slave(i doubt she knew this but who's stopping me from lying to these noobs) sunny might hate her but he still loves her (not romantic) love is a complex emotion
Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

but that's not true at all most readers are men here

Rahul_Verma_9515:What are you talking about? Did you even understand what I was talking there? Let me explain for you I am saying that this novel will be mostly liked by feminist or by girls/women only.
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Guiltythree
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Shameless author here :) Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! - "First of all, what is this book about?" It's about a guy named Sunny who lives in a dystopian future where some people are forced to periodically visit a magical world and battle terrible monsters. If they survive, they receive special powers. - "What type of guy is Sunny?" He is a cynical, disillusioned young man with a bleak outlook on life. But! He has a sense of humor and a strong desire to not only survive but also thrive in this world. You'll like him, I promise. - "Will he be overpowered?" Not really. He will certainly become powerful, but not powerful enough to steamroll over his enemies. Every victory Sunny achieves will be won with cunning, hard work, and skill. So, more of a Dark Souls type of situation. - "Will there be romance?" Yes, but a slow one. - "Romance, you say! So... a harem? There is a harem, right?" Not really. Sunny will be surrounded by a lot of beautiful people, both male a female, but he will probably only have one romantic relationship. Uh... one at a time, at least. We'll see! - "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing one chapter every day. The amount may increase in the future, but it depends on a lot of factors. - And, finally... "Aren't you too full of yourself? You rated your book five stars!" What can I say, it's a great book. One of the best books I've ever written! I've only written one other book, but still. It's definitely one of the top two best books I've written in my life. If you don't believe me, check for yourself ;)

Ashton_A
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GhastlyGryffon
GhastlyGryffonLv15

Hey there folks, Griffin here. Resident music composer, game developer, and occasional enjoyer of good books. I’m here to give a COMPLETELY UNBIASED review of Shadow Slave, written by a good buddy of mine named Guiltythree. Before getting into an actual review, I’d like to start by saying that my absolute favorite part of this piece of literature, beyond the awesome story, is the community surrounding it. The Shadow Slave discord server is one of the few online spaces I have been a been active in that truly makes me feel like I’m part of a family. And that isn’t just because I recently found out that I’m long lost cousins with the one of the lead moderators (true story, shout out NobleQueenBee 😂). Never have I been a part of a community so active, engaged, non-toxic, respectful and loving. I cannot recommend enough that you join the server if you end up reading this wonderful webnovel. Speaking of which, it’s probably time I start talking about the actual novel. I’ll split the review up into 4 simple categories: Characters, World Building, Power System, and Story. —————— Characters: —————— If you’re looking for a generic overpowered protagonist who crushes every obstacle in his way, you came to the wrong place. And while those types of characters can be fun to read, they often lack the depth and complexity that makes a character feel truely *real*. Sunless, the main character of this story, is a flawed and realistic human being. His thoughts are as realistic as his approach to problems; I find myself often thinking that I would make very similar decisions if put in similar situations. His weaknesses push him to work harder. Every challenge he faces is an opportunity to learn. Instead of steamrolling every encounter, Sunny is almost always facing an uphill battle. Through hard work, quick thinking, and sometimes sheer luck, he just might be able to come out on top. That isn’t to say Sunny never gets his time to shine, there are quite a few memorable power fantasy moments. But through and through, Sunny’s dark humor, wholesomely pessimistic nature, and Tsundere complexion make his perspective an absolute joy to read. Beyond it’s protagonist, Shadow Slave is overflowing with unique and loveable characters. Guiltythree brings so much life to the cast of this novel that even the villains are captivating. Even the points of the story where I would be bored if I was reading any other novel are made to be intimate and refreshing through the carefully crafted complex characters that Guilty has introduced us to. A simple dinner conversation between old friends demands as much of my attention as a climactic battle, simply because you grow to cherrish every single one of cast members. They feel like real people I have met and befriended. —————— World Building —————— The world of Shadow Slave, similar to Guilty’s other novel, is a gritty and realistic dystopia. Flashy elements of fantasy and sci fi collide and serve to distract the reader from the grim reality behind the scenes. At the forefront of your attention are the awakened individuals, people walking around with super powers, fighting with metal armor, bows and swords to defend the citizens from the Nightmare Creature threat. But as much as the government propaganda would like you to believe in these real-life heros, they are just as shady as any human society can be. There are starving orphans on the edges of the city, sweatshop labor conditions for factory workers, the climate and weather has become polluted to the point of lethality, and there is the ever-present lovecraftian threat of the Nightnare Spell. And yet, as dangerous as this world Guilty has crafted truly is, I can’t help but wish I could experience it for real. Every bit of lore surrounding the dream world is intriguing. I’m a sucker for stories involving ancient history, civilizations, and dark forces. If you are as well, without spoiling anything, you will LOVE the incredibly unique and mysterious world of Shadow Slave. —————— Power System —————— Many power systems in other novels and stories suffer from a lack of balance. What I believe sets apart the system Guilty has created here is the unique aspects and flaws that make this power system unlike any story I’ve ever read but also keep it in a healthy balance. While in the world of shadow slave, people can fly, run at superhuman speeds, teleport, heal injuries and set enemies on fire, each ability comes with its own unique flaw. This system keeps combat interesting while maintaining a sense of equality. 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