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KappaKappa
KappaKappaLv12yr
2022-05-29 18:46

Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion. Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.

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Daoist679622
Daoist679622Lv2

Yes, the novels are slow paced. and although I believe that this is a masterpiece, I think this pace is not suitable for everyone. I guess it really depends on taste.

LeonLiegt
LeonLiegtLv12

ive had exactly the same experience

lordseven
lordsevenLv15

20 chapters is kind of low though. the story didn't even start by then. give it at least 100 chapters, the current Arc (which starts at chapter 30 and still ongoing by chapter 250) is like a rollercoaster. I feel like the story got extremely good towards 100. then showed down a fair bit between 100~150 and picked up again up to now. some portions are epic.

Lorenzo_Kim
Lorenzo_KimLv13

Sorry but 100’ chapters in and you are wrong! People cant appreciate a good story because they want a storyline that tells on itself 20 chapters in. Its your loss

Creggo
CreggoLv14

Opinions can't be wrong

Lorenzo_Kim:Sorry but 100’ chapters in and you are wrong! People cant appreciate a good story because they want a storyline that tells on itself 20 chapters in. Its your loss
GeckoRich
GeckoRichLv14

If someone has the opinion that the earth is flat, they are wrong. I don't understand the take that opinions can't be wrong.

Creggo:Opinions can't be wrong
BookWorm69
BookWorm69Lv10

Some opinions can be wrong but dependingbon the subject some things have no absolute right answer, comparing something like earth being round and whether a story is progressing too slowly isn't realistic comparison... Some say it's slow while others say it's progressing at a normal pace.

GeckoRich
GeckoRichLv14

I can see this is directed at my reply even though you didn't actually reply to me. Why? Some opinions can't be wrong that's true but saying flat out "opinions can't be wrong." is absurd. Many opinions can be wrong and then another set of opinions can be brain dead but not flat out wrong or right. Like enjoying eating extremely burnt food, can't really be wrong for enjoying that but it's incredibly unusual. All I wanted to point out originally was the flawed logic of "opinions can't be wrong" That blew my mind when I read it, an incredibly childish opinion that is, ironically, wrong lol.

BookWorm69:Some opinions can be wrong but dependingbon the subject some things have no absolute right answer, comparing something like earth being round and whether a story is progressing too slowly isn't realistic comparison... Some say it's slow while others say it's progressing at a normal pace.
KappaKappa
KappaKappaLv1

The good thing about the author is, that he at least does not delete critical reviews like most other Authors here like MyLittleBrother etc.

Aby55
Aby55Lv15

that's a dispute over facts tho, not rlly an opinion

GeckoRich:If someone has the opinion that the earth is flat, they are wrong. I don't understand the take that opinions can't be wrong.
GeckoRich
GeckoRichLv14

An opinion is a judgment based on facts. What you just said is a bunch of different words to describe the same thing.

Aby55:that's a dispute over facts tho, not rlly an opinion
GeckoRich
GeckoRichLv14

Do you also believe that opinions can't be wrong? If that is the case, I'd rather not continue this discussion.

Aby55:that's a dispute over facts tho, not rlly an opinion
Aby55
Aby55Lv15

definition first result on Google, "a view or judgment formed about something, not necessarily based on fact or knowledge."

GeckoRich:An opinion is a judgment based on facts. What you just said is a bunch of different words to describe the same thing.
Aby55
Aby55Lv15

depends how you define opinion. generally an opinion cant be wrong but I like this quote about it, "All opinions are not equal. Some are a very great deal more robust, sophisticated and well supported in logic and argument than others." An opinion is generally supposed to be something personal like preferring one movie to another which can't be incorrect because it's your personal opinion and preference. saying the earth is flat isn't rlly an opinion, its a mistaken belief, a rejection of proven fact. I dont rlly care to have this discussion anyways so carry on

GeckoRich:Do you also believe that opinions can't be wrong? If that is the case, I'd rather not continue this discussion.
Kwami
KwamiLv1

You realize you're regurgitating what he just said right? "Generally an opinion can't be wrong" did you hear yourself, the point of his argument was stating that some opinions are wrong, but your argument against that is unintentionally agreeing with it. Also, you can't distinguish between an opinion and a "mistaken belief" any opinion that doesn't aline with yours can be seen as a mistaken belief. If in 1920 someone's opinion is Stalin is a great person that is both their opinion and a mistaken belief as it is wrong. Just like enjoying burnt food, which normally is borderline inedible.

Aby55:depends how you define opinion. generally an opinion cant be wrong but I like this quote about it, "All opinions are not equal. Some are a very great deal more robust, sophisticated and well supported in logic and argument than others." An opinion is generally supposed to be something personal like preferring one movie to another which can't be incorrect because it's your personal opinion and preference. saying the earth is flat isn't rlly an opinion, its a mistaken belief, a rejection of proven fact. I dont rlly care to have this discussion anyways so carry on
PlebLord
PlebLordLv4

Explain that again but with the flat Earth subject. Earth is not flat and it's a proven fact, so if someone has an 'opinion' that Earth is flat, then it's not an opinion.

Kwami:You realize you're regurgitating what he just said right? "Generally an opinion can't be wrong" did you hear yourself, the point of his argument was stating that some opinions are wrong, but your argument against that is unintentionally agreeing with it. Also, you can't distinguish between an opinion and a "mistaken belief" any opinion that doesn't aline with yours can be seen as a mistaken belief. If in 1920 someone's opinion is Stalin is a great person that is both their opinion and a mistaken belief as it is wrong. Just like enjoying burnt food, which normally is borderline inedible.
Kwami
KwamiLv1

Well, it's their view or judgment that the government and world have lied which is still an opinionated belief as there isn't factual evidence.

PlebLord:Explain that again but with the flat Earth subject. Earth is not flat and it's a proven fact, so if someone has an 'opinion' that Earth is flat, then it's not an opinion.
Siminala
SiminalaLv3

oof the poor guy that wrote this review

EarthlyNatureLover
EarthlyNatureLoverLv14

It's like kids fighting over lollipop and candy bickering which is sweeter HAHAHAHA

Siminala:oof the poor guy that wrote this review
hamuzaluza
hamuzaluzaLv2

That's alright, I've heard the same from some... giraffes I was showing the novel to. Their reaction didn't fit in with the rest of the animals I saw in the zoo, but that's perfectly acceptable (mainly cuz they are giraffes). Yes, this is a joke.

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