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Kurama24
Kurama24Lv42yr
2022-11-27 23:24

I have mixed feelings for this fanfic. Pros: 1. Grammar and writing quality is perfect hardly any mistakes 2. The powers are used unique not cliche like sharingan, tremor-tremor fruit or stuff like that. 3. the author knew how to use the abilities well 4. Mc's interactions with characters was well done and doesn't feel weird/bland Cons: 1. The way the mc became an orphan is weird. The father divorced his wife bcz the child had pink hair instead of 1 of their hair colors and when the wife told him to do a blood test it was glossed over after all for one said that a less than day old baby is quirkless so the father left and the sad mother left the baby infront of orphanage even though we don't know why. we don't know if she is rich/poor or any background info about her she just left him just like that. 2. The weird nerfs, forced plot, and bad suspense. (The 1st nerf part)So mc as falcon fought for 1st time against all for 1 and was hit on the chest a serious injury so Mc now has to stop being falcon bcz he has time limit (45 mins) like all might to stay in that form but then he loses the falcon form (it merged with him so he can use powers without transforming but is limited due to weak body[which is the 2nd nerf])since he suffered a lethal injury from his 2nd fight against all for one (the forced plot part) which started bcz "coincidentally" when mc isn't in orphanage the child the mc told to stay in orphanage decides to go outside to help her 2 friends find something they lost so she gets kidnapped bcz she has teleport quirk. So mc transforms into falcon and used 30 mins out of 45 mins to reach all for 1 so now he has 15 mins to beat him (that's the bad suspense part) and after it took mc, all might and mirko their all to kill him (all might still suffered the injury that weakened him in canon) the mc couldn't choose between capturing all for 1's body that was being taken by the mist guy and saving all might who will bleed to death (even though he had mirko with him and it would need less than a minute to use imagine breaker to capture him back then help all might) so in the end the villain body escapes and all might lives. Tl Dr: frustrating but good ff some ppl will like it some won't.

Imagine Breaker in MHA

Geraint124x
3.9
142 Chs

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ForgeCoffee
ForgeCoffeeLv14

Bruh, you just gave me the reason on why not to read

2yr
50
Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

I'm glad I could help? 😅

ForgeCoffee:Bruh, you just gave me the reason on why not to read
2yr
18
mox9
mox9Lv14

Yeah, thanks for the help

Kurama24:I'm glad I could help? 😅
2yr
12
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

yup thanks for the warning not to read it. Pretty big negatives points you brought up pretty chill rating too honestly for the negative points with the forced plot and character development etc that points would be 0 in my book so kudos for the rather friendly review

2yr
18
Kurama24
Kurama24Lv4

Thank you and for the rating I didn't want to put 1-2 star review bcz that's usually saved for extremely terrible or frustrating novels like shinobi of the straw hats that novel had soo much potential but was ruined by author

2yr
12
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Thanks for the warning bro. Nerfs are dumb...

2yr
10
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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

for a story that ended my joy in less than 10 minutes, I must congratulate you. the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the grammar, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it, it will be good for your mental health

2yr

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14

Will he be able to become Captain Falcon again? I assume his Captain Falcon form was damaged and needs time to recover. Or is it damaged beyond repair? Personally I hope he gets it back in time for AFO’s next appearance in Kamino. It would be hilarious to have him return just as he and All might are about to throw down after Bakugo gets kidnapped.

2yr
TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv13

MC with Imagine Breaker is embodiment of Bad Luck. I hope MC can survive in MHA World. It will be excellent if MC can travel to multiverse like Marvel or DC World.

2yr
Animatic
AnimaticLv14

I like where this is going. I regret reading it on its early chapters. I've been searching for a fanfic like this. I've been a fan of the toaru series and bought all the LNs. I've read till the latest chapter and Imagine Breaker is more broken than it seems. It denies Good Luck and if the MC can wield it properly it can deny Bad Luck as well.

2yr
Godkinhdhfrhdgg
GodkinhdhfrhdggLv4

At first it was good but he was just another all might at his full power then the mc received two big nerfs that just made him a slightly stronger izuku and he did a bunch of changes just for the plot to go the same way in the end just not good

2yr
Lagash
LagashLv1

the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it

2yr
Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5

trash [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
Frizepize
FrizepizeLv14

I got bored and got cringe at some part but still fun to read and good Grammer. very good not gonna lie, entertaining to read but got some vandetta at some part so....

2yr
Argent_ASNC
Argent_ASNCLv1

only according to the description of the profile of MC, the desire to read has already disappeared...................................................................................................................

1yr
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