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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv12yr
2022-11-24 10:15

for a story that ended my joy in less than 10 minutes, I must congratulate you. the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the grammar, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it, it will be good for your mental health

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Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthor

Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Phaze_MorningStar2
Phaze_MorningStar2Lv4

You Let Him Down

Geraint124x:Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14

Geraint124x:Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

can you tell me how the imagine breaker even works in MHA? quirks aren't supernatural or magical, they are natural mutations and genetics, so it wouldn't work.

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

mutations which can have magical or supernatural effects...

nicholas8293:can you tell me how the imagine breaker even works in MHA? quirks aren't supernatural or magical, they are natural mutations and genetics, so it wouldn't work.
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

in their verse it's all science-based, it might be different science than ours, but it is science.

Carlos_Balbizan:mutations which can have magical or supernatural effects...
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

you are basically contradicting yourself

nicholas8293:in their verse it's all science-based, it might be different science than ours, but it is science.
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

how? From what I understand it doesn't negate science and natural stuff.

Carlos_Balbizan: you are basically contradicting yourself
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

do you even read what you write?

nicholas8293:how? From what I understand it doesn't negate science and natural stuff.
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

yea, I read through it, point out the part where you think I'm contradicting myself instead of just saying that I am.

Carlos_Balbizan: do you even read what you write?
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

you say that the imagine breaker wouldn't work, but the imagine breaker was basically turned into a peculiarity... thus connecting to this "science" that you don't even know how to define. (turning the concept "quirk" into supernatural)

nicholas8293:yea, I read through it, point out the part where you think I'm contradicting myself instead of just saying that I am.
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

just because their science is different from ours, it doesn't make it magic or supernatural, thus imagine breaker doesn't work on them. it's also the natural evolution of the humanity of their earth. from the fandom "Imagine Breaker can only destroy things that had their harmony taken from them, so something that has been abnormal from the start will never be negated by the Imagine Breaker.", you could say that quirks have always been abnormal, so they also couldn't be negated.

Carlos_Balbizan:you say that the imagine breaker wouldn't work, but the imagine breaker was basically turned into a peculiarity... thus connecting to this "science" that you don't even know how to define. (turning the concept "quirk" into supernatural)
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

... I'm too lazy to argue with someone like you, good night! I am going to sleep

nicholas8293:just because their science is different from ours, it doesn't make it magic or supernatural, thus imagine breaker doesn't work on them. it's also the natural evolution of the humanity of their earth. from the fandom "Imagine Breaker can only destroy things that had their harmony taken from them, so something that has been abnormal from the start will never be negated by the Imagine Breaker.", you could say that quirks have always been abnormal, so they also couldn't be negated.
nicholas8293
nicholas8293Lv1

Carlos_Balbizan:... I'm too lazy to argue with someone like you, good night! I am going to sleep
Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4

pretty immature when replying to a review

Geraint124x:Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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Geraint124x
Geraint124xAuthor

Then tell me what you learned from that review? He/she almost hate everything about the work. Which part he doesn't like? English is not my first language. It's nothing but a hate comment. If you don't like it, don't read it. Everyone has a genre they like. Also I never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down, never gonna run around and desert you, never gonna make you cry, never gonna say goodbye, never gonna tell a lie and hurt you. Anyway, I will always love you guys no matter how much you hate me. Author, probably.

Alfiemooon:pretty immature when replying to a review
Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4

I learned the plot, character, and development were bad🤷‍♂️😭

Geraint124x:Then tell me what you learned from that review? He/she almost hate everything about the work. Which part he doesn't like? English is not my first language. It's nothing but a hate comment. If you don't like it, don't read it. Everyone has a genre they like. Also I never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down, never gonna run around and desert you, never gonna make you cry, never gonna say goodbye, never gonna tell a lie and hurt you. Anyway, I will always love you guys no matter how much you hate me. Author, probably.
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Stray99th
Stray99thLv13

How can the author tell you anything when he's partially braindead?

nicholas8293:can you tell me how the imagine breaker even works in MHA? quirks aren't supernatural or magical, they are natural mutations and genetics, so it wouldn't work.
The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14

I may be wrong because I haven’t delved into the lore of Toaru, heck I haven’t even watched the anime properly. But I thought that most of the “magic” in the city is made through calculations. That is why they made the big school city in the first place? To give an environment that inspires learning… not actually magic, but mathematical science? And with mha, wasn’t there a time where they didn’t have quirks? And don’t the quirks manifest at like 4 or something? So they didn’t have them till then? And if mha only uses science to understand quirks what is eraser heads science, what about Eri, momo does nuclear fusion/fission without blowing up, zero gravity girl messes with fundamental laws of the universe, and many more that somehow use science I guess… Sorry if this made no sense… it’s 5am and I need sleep. 😅

nicholas8293:just because their science is different from ours, it doesn't make it magic or supernatural, thus imagine breaker doesn't work on them. it's also the natural evolution of the humanity of their earth. from the fandom "Imagine Breaker can only destroy things that had their harmony taken from them, so something that has been abnormal from the start will never be negated by the Imagine Breaker.", you could say that quirks have always been abnormal, so they also couldn't be negated.
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