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Yes, you don't think the comment section are for both positive and negative interactions, npc. I can see that, clearly.
You forgot the "Insert generic pic/gif: I have no argument but I'm better than you", idiot.
Laid off on this for a few days. Is he going to mess with the plot? Quite the moron for someone who supposedly thinks ahead.
More fun, haha. Unfortunately, I won't get to see it./sBye folks.
Can't unsee this kid's weak will, now. The past chapters, he has worried about everything, with none of the demeanor he's had before. Disappointing.
Literally pressured into a decision, lol.
Kid wouldn't have joined the revolutionary army, lol.
Yes, lol. Once a revolutionary, always a revolutionary.
Take your time.
I can get by this. Anyway, I hope if they ever go to Skypeia, that he doesn't steal Luffy's plot with Enel and such.
How about not relying on a system or another anime's power for starters? You're already writing a fanfic, the least you can do is make a character that blends with the story, idiot.
"Don't be happy about the characters, none of them are actually from One piece, they just have the same name, because chaos, blah blah blah""Same goes for the devil fruits. I wIlL rEvIsE tHeM mYsElF" There's a reason Oda is a successful mangaka and you're a fanfic writer, you retarded sack of shit. Ask someone to chop your hands off and never write again.
Relying on a ROB as a plot device is already cringe, so the premise itself is lame.
Nothing about this is realistic or Onepiece. This is the author being a horny permavirgin making poorly written smut with characters that for some reason has the same name as OP characters. Nothing about this author's "Makino" is Makino, etc. Chop this idiot's hands off and never let them write again.