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Maybe a binding vow to create boddhisatva like Netero, or a version of it where the fists can come from angles?
Alright, this genuinely could potentially become the best fanfic on this site. It doesn't hijack the original story or warp it into something unrecognizable, it respects the canon direction while still carving out its own space. The MC isn't all-powerful or omnipotent, and the tension actually feels real because failure is always on the table. Canon characters act like themselves- competent, in-character, and never dumbed down just to make the MC look good. What really sells it is that there's a believable path where the mc could lose to the main cast in a grand finale, and that loss wouldnt feel hollow, but earned and epic, the kind of ending most fanfics never quite manage to land. I can genuinely see this going far, even bleeding into modulo's later arcs, with the MC eventually returning as the villain that he is. That kind of long-term narrative weight is rare with fanfics, and it's what makes this stand out. I know, I know, it's only 11 chapters in, but if the quality is maintained, reading this will 100% become a recurring activity in my daily life.
Miwa?
How is this right? Him breaking the balance implies there is one. Which there isn't, since Gojo already broke it.
Now this, this is how you write fanfiction.
You literally just agreed with their point right after asking what about it was gooner fantasy, you absolute brain-dead moron. That alone should've tipped you off that you're retarded. Besides that, calling it a gooner fantasy is lazy and reductive and basically an intellectually cheap dismissal for people who cant be bothered to articulate an actual critique, even if there are elements that partially fit. All that said, I do agree the Heian era shouldn't be dragged out forever. JJK is ultimately set on the modern era. The point of fanfiction isn't to hijack names and slap them onto an entirely different story like some talentless parasite; it's to transform the source in a way that actually makes internal sense. I hope the author realizes that simple fact.
This mutt of an author has no respect for either MHA or Invincible; therefore, I have no respect for them either. Every chapter reads like someone forcing themselves through a franchise they neither understand nor appreciate. Listen, dog, if your goal is to reimagine a story you clearly despise, congratulations, you've succeeded only in exposing how little respect you have for the worlds you're borrowing from. This isn't a fanfic, it's vandalism. Putrid trash, you deserve to have your wrists broken.
You're illiterate.
You have no standards.