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Adrian_Putra_3580
Adrian_Putra_3580Lv13yr
2021-12-24 21:50

My opinion the MC is a good guy,not cautios and smart and maybe have a mental problem he expecting Edward to read his mind(100% true) but he not doing anything to defense againts it like not going to fork he do not have obligation to go there🤔 because that place is dangerous and 99% the danger is because Bella and the reason she still a live because she is the main character and he is a normal human he do not know if he have power before he go to fork but he still choose to go to fork not really a smart move. Its just my opinion good luck on tour work author 🙏👍👍

Twilight: Omega

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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

he had already died once, so he no longer has that strong fear of dying. if somehow you ended up in a fictional world and had the opportunity to see and interact with them, what would you do? in a world where you can find a vampire anywhere, meaning anywhere is dangerous. and not to mention the already existing possibility of him being the "soul mate" of some cullen, because only his existence is already considered AU. and about him waiting to know if his mind would be read... it's a rational thing, because what could he do to defend himself from an attack/mind reading? he at least needed edward to try to read his mind so he would know if he also had a "mental shield", and he really didn't have any malicious thoughts of trying to hurt someone there to have the real need to protect edward's own mind

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Figurinha
FigurinhaLv2

Sim, ele devia ter tentado colocar alumínio na cabeça😆

3yr
RaiseHavoc
RaiseHavocLv4

Onb m ul

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Estaría genial si estuviera bien hecho, el contexto no es detallado, la calidad de escritura le falta, no hay estabilidad de actualización y el diseño de personajes está horrible.

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I like the story, wish updates were more frequent but the author is doing their thing so can't really complain. This story is very similar to another twilight fanfic, (almost the exact same) obviously there are differences. A good read so far and am eager to see how the story progresses

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Aghil
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I have not read this fanfic yet, nor have I read any of the reviews for it. Nonetheless, I just have to state that "Omega" in a wolf pack does not mean strong. They are sort of the social glue of the pack and, more often than not, the mediator, meaning they are bullied a lot by both Alphas and Betas. In a kingdom setting, they are the scapegoats and Jesters. You can Google it if you're curious.

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LastGod
LastGodLv5

I think this is a decent fanfic. But it def could have been better. The good points are the story and the MC they are cool and i like their character. The main problem is the finer points. The two big ones are the romance between the MC and his girl seeming to be very weak and thin feeling like there was no real relationship there just a cordiality that included kissing. The other week point is the character dialog not being enough to make you care about the characters. The MC seem mostly fleshed out but the other characters didn't seem to have as solid a foundation or they were not given enough time or dialog for us to understand their character. Another good point thought was the action that really was awesome and kept you entertain all in all it was a decent read.

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