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BAD_MAN
BAD_MANLv113yr
2022-04-15 08:37

Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Twilight: Omega

confused4you
4.2
53 Chs

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confused4you
confused4youAuthor

giving up on you.

3yr
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Adrian_Putra_3580
Adrian_Putra_3580Lv1

My opinion the MC is a good guy,not cautios and smart and maybe have a mental problem he expecting Edward to read his mind(100% true) but he not doing anything to defense againts it like not going to fork he do not have obligation to go there🤔 because that place is dangerous and 99% the danger is because Bella and the reason she still a live because she is the main character and he is a normal human he do not know if he have power before he go to fork but he still choose to go to fork not really a smart move. Its just my opinion good luck on tour work author 🙏👍👍

3yr

Jesus_Villa_1898
Jesus_Villa_1898Lv1

Estaría genial si estuviera bien hecho, el contexto no es detallado, la calidad de escritura le falta, no hay estabilidad de actualización y el diseño de personajes está horrible.

3yr
Joao_Silva_0541
Joao_Silva_0541Lv2

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bloodcoler
bloodcolerLv1

harem like wolf pack please for ticket THE HAREM

3yr
casreader
casreaderLv15

I like the story, wish updates were more frequent but the author is doing their thing so can't really complain. This story is very similar to another twilight fanfic, (almost the exact same) obviously there are differences. A good read so far and am eager to see how the story progresses

3yr
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeee

3yr
Aghil
AghilLv14

I have not read this fanfic yet, nor have I read any of the reviews for it. Nonetheless, I just have to state that "Omega" in a wolf pack does not mean strong. They are sort of the social glue of the pack and, more often than not, the mediator, meaning they are bullied a lot by both Alphas and Betas. In a kingdom setting, they are the scapegoats and Jesters. You can Google it if you're curious.

6mth
LastGod
LastGodLv5

I think this is a decent fanfic. But it def could have been better. The good points are the story and the MC they are cool and i like their character. The main problem is the finer points. The two big ones are the romance between the MC and his girl seeming to be very weak and thin feeling like there was no real relationship there just a cordiality that included kissing. The other week point is the character dialog not being enough to make you care about the characters. The MC seem mostly fleshed out but the other characters didn't seem to have as solid a foundation or they were not given enough time or dialog for us to understand their character. Another good point thought was the action that really was awesome and kept you entertain all in all it was a decent read.

1yr
Alex_Boen
Alex_BoenLv14

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2yr
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