Autor, boa sorte com isso👍👍 Mas a sua fanfic é a única coisa que estou lendo atualmente; você me viciou nela e agora tem a responsabilidade de me manter são...😆😫preciso de maaaaaais

Não se importe com as más criticas sobre a evolução lenta! Embora eu ache que ele poderia sim evoluir um pouco mais rápido, eu não desgosto desse progresso. Única coisa que deveria ser mais rápidas, são as atualizações haha preciso de mais capítulos![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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Where is the new chapter?

Tudo bem ser tímido. Mas como diabos alguém é tímido na frente de algumas criancinhas? Kkkkk e pq ela teve essa reação tão infantil? Kkkk

Mas se ela queria saber se ela se sairia melhor que a Sakura original, deveria ir sem um sistema. Qualquer um consegue se tornar poderoso com um sistema. Mas bem, não foi ela que escolheu ir com um sistema.🙂

He is growing too fast 😅

I think so

Todas as histórias legais de crepúsculo são dropadas no começo. Igual as de Teen Wolf e twd😢😢

Uma brasileira🙆 ksks

Já está mais alto que o ator do filme, mas se não me engano, Jacob deveria ser alto nos livros, algo como 1,90.

Ele poderia ter poupado Dale. Dale é um velho chato, mas poderia ter sido colocado em seu lugar...

Concordo, voto para que ele morra e um novo seja criado. Kkkkk

A história é muito burra mano, só aceita.

Estou com você.

Thanks for the chapter and congratulations for the 1000 powe stones😁😁😁

I don't usually like systems in "normal" worlds, but in this story the system is pretty limited, so it didn't bother me that much. I hate harem, but at least women don't throw themselves at the protagonist in this story and so far he's only been with Amy. Amy was a very cliché choice to be his partner, I would particularly prefer her sister, but that's ok too. At least he didn't get Maggie. In the first chapters, it was not said exactly how many survived in the Atlanta camp, we were only informed that Ed was the only loss, but there was no clarification about the number of survivors of the Atlanta camp and at no time after the horde of 41 zombies, it was not mentioned survivors of the Atlanta camp besides the cast of the series, but remember that in addition to the cast, there were about 20 extras in the original story. I thought he was very asshole with Beth and her little boyfriend, Jame (I think). No need for that at all... And he was also pretty grumpy at the time, but it's understandable, a lot of stress and such. The romance with Amy is very slow, but it suits the character... Damn, that's why I prefer Andrea who soon slept with the governor in the original series 😅 The protagonist's personality has been very dark lately, he even thinks about killing for no reason... I don't like it, I really don't. But I would have shot the Governor's two lackeys in the face right there as soon as they said the name "Governor". It's like Daryl or Shane said, fuck what others will think! In my opinion, he can already make a few small mistakes and people aren't going to make a big fuss over something so small. Well the story is going well and I loved the author's choice to save Sophia, Amy and especially Shane, I always thought his death was pretty dumb too. Great writing, I read with the automatic translator (even though I know a little English, I'm lazy) and I found few mistakes (about 2 or 3, in 91 chapters). So far, this is the best The Walking Dead fanfic I've ever read. I hope the author keeps posting. But if it's my opinion, the second world shouldn't be a "normal" one, unless it resets its level and stats. Two more reviews 1st it drives me crazy these 20 points not yet allocated, I hate it when protagonists hold their free points. I don't think it's very smart, although many protagonists do it precisely because they think it's smart😅 2° him wearing a mask is very strange. Very much so. Also, does he have tattoos? I don't remember him doing any or you mentioning them before... But I skip the parts where the authors present the characters' appearance, so I may have missed it. I did more criticism than praise, but I really liked the story, believe me, i really liked it😁❣️ Reading from Brazil 🇧🇷

O sistema não interage, mas agora ele tem um chip inteligente que interage. Haha

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Kkkkkk é verdade, em todos os países as pessoas gostam de ver brigas! Aqui no Brasil, o povo prefere ver brigas pessoalmente do que assistir nos cinemas😝