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Kabuk5Lv143yr
2021-11-20 17:15

You know, the description is misleading, it says hedonist instead of rapist, that should be fixed. Not my cup of tea, but some people might enjoy reading about these kinds of characters.

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KasiCairLv1

Yeah, this story is a massive disappointment. Not only is the grammar so bad some sentences are unreadable, but the MC is also too 'evil'. Do note I added ' ' for a reason there. There is evil and then there is this. A man who is acting evil and killing, manipulating people just for the sake of it. Now, don't get me wrong, I am all for evil MCs but there are some limits that should not be crossed lest the character becomes unlikeable. But to be frank, the grammar and structure of the story are the real problems. The MC's character is just driving the final nail in the coffin for me. Well, this is my opinion and you are free to ignore it.

Zzz_808Lv3

you funny people, how can evil characters have underscores, lol

KasiCair:Yeah, this story is a massive disappointment. Not only is the grammar so bad some sentences are unreadable, but the MC is also too 'evil'. Do note I added ' ' for a reason there. There is evil and then there is this. A man who is acting evil and killing, manipulating people just for the sake of it. Now, don't get me wrong, I am all for evil MCs but there are some limits that should not be crossed lest the character becomes unlikeable. But to be frank, the grammar and structure of the story are the real problems. The MC's character is just driving the final nail in the coffin for me. Well, this is my opinion and you are free to ignore it.
TheOnlyKingLv4

You know, your comment was what made me read this fic lol this is exactly what I was looking for

KasiCair:Yeah, this story is a massive disappointment. Not only is the grammar so bad some sentences are unreadable, but the MC is also too 'evil'. Do note I added ' ' for a reason there. There is evil and then there is this. A man who is acting evil and killing, manipulating people just for the sake of it. Now, don't get me wrong, I am all for evil MCs but there are some limits that should not be crossed lest the character becomes unlikeable. But to be frank, the grammar and structure of the story are the real problems. The MC's character is just driving the final nail in the coffin for me. Well, this is my opinion and you are free to ignore it.
KasiCairLv1

Good. I can accept that, to be honest. While it didn't get my interest up :D... I am happy it does it for you. Enjoy.

TheOnlyKing:You know, your comment was what made me read this fic lol this is exactly what I was looking for
VenerableDemonLv4

Bro go check out my reading list there's tons of evil mc's to read, my personal all time favorite madness apostle is in it, if you haven't read it do read it man. It's soooooo good.

TheOnlyKing:You know, your comment was what made me read this fic lol this is exactly what I was looking for
VenerableDemonLv4

I have read a few of you're books, the naruto one and Harry Potter. I liked the Potter but dropped the naruto cuz I hate when mc's share things with others. If you're Mc was even a little selfish would have loved it

KasiCair:Good. I can accept that, to be honest. While it didn't get my interest up :D... I am happy it does it for you. Enjoy.
TheOnlyKingLv4

Thank you my brother, it looks like you have a fine reading list. I'll be making great use of it.

VenerableDemon:Bro go check out my reading list there's tons of evil mc's to read, my personal all time favorite madness apostle is in it, if you haven't read it do read it man. It's soooooo good.
VenerableDemonLv4

Hahaha definitely do, dont forget madness apostle it's so good man

TheOnlyKing:Thank you my brother, it looks like you have a fine reading list. I'll be making great use of it.
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