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AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv133yr
2021-12-01 06:47

meh, author start giving strength to other characters than mc....especially after mc kill the dragon but his friend who's got the war spoil.....meh.....when mc isn't strong and op enough.....

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

His friend is dragonborn, while if the MC wanted to intercept the dragon's soul he would need the third spell. There just wasn't a reasonable way for the mc to absorb the dragon's soul, so it was better to let his friend (dragonborn) absorb it. Furthermore, the mc also gained pider after the fight and this will only increase.

AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

but....I still don't like it, except, if the author makes mc stronger than his friend many times and doesn't make his friend as strong as mc, and also later his friend will become a slave or in other words is peerage for mc....then i am fine with it

Spelloyal:His friend is dragonborn, while if the MC wanted to intercept the dragon's soul he would need the third spell. There just wasn't a reasonable way for the mc to absorb the dragon's soul, so it was better to let his friend (dragonborn) absorb it. Furthermore, the mc also gained pider after the fight and this will only increase.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

You can see from the start it looks like mc has a beta indication even simp, so what can be expected only mc japan

AntiWorldSystem:but....I still don't like it, except, if the author makes mc stronger than his friend many times and doesn't make his friend as strong as mc, and also later his friend will become a slave or in other words is peerage for mc....then i am fine with it
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AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

pffft buhahahahahaha

Zzz_808:You can see from the start it looks like mc has a beta indication even simp, so what can be expected only mc japan
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

right , its common nowadays on wn , not what it used to be , which made harems and R18s great , but now things are simple , confused where else to read .

AntiWorldSystem:pffft buhahahahahaha
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mugiwaya
mugiwayaLv1

Guys, please recommend me some fanfics that you call good, I'm frustrated I can't find anything I can read.

Zzz_808:right , its common nowadays on wn , not what it used to be , which made harems and R18s great , but now things are simple , confused where else to read .
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

for now it's not there, or you can see the ff that I commented on was good, but lately I'm cursing the new fanfic I found.

mugiwaya:Guys, please recommend me some fanfics that you call good, I'm frustrated I can't find anything I can read.
mugiwaya
mugiwayaLv1

I've been looking for your comment but it's all curses so I gave up😂.

Zzz_808:for now it's not there, or you can see the ff that I commented on was good, but lately I'm cursing the new fanfic I found.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

yes because it's ugly, below me a lot of good comments, I'm honest with the assessment, because I saw the first MC when reading the story, if it's beta, sim, and so on I will throw the fanfic, if the prefix is ​​good and the author spoils it in in the middle of the story I will curse loudly kekeke

mugiwaya:I've been looking for your comment but it's all curses so I gave up😂.
Kutu
KutuLv4

bro you should see a therapist, I am serious.

AntiWorldSystem:but....I still don't like it, except, if the author makes mc stronger than his friend many times and doesn't make his friend as strong as mc, and also later his friend will become a slave or in other words is peerage for mc....then i am fine with it
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PinPonPun
PinPonPunLv4

Do you know Skyrim?

AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

i know, but before you tell me about his friend is dragon born, i know it, why must author give mc spoil of war to his friend? meh....

PinPonPun:Do you know Skyrim?
Peacemaker2_at_
Peacemaker2_at_Lv13

If nobody recommended something, I would give you the tip of exploring AO3 and ff.net. There are good ones on there, but there is also trash. The best way to find something good is to either search by favourites with a certain word count or Kudos with a certain word count. Then you can get long and good fanfics.

mugiwaya:Guys, please recommend me some fanfics that you call good, I'm frustrated I can't find anything I can read.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

After all the guy is right, do you think your friend will forever be your friend? , at least get full authority or trust if later your friend commits treason , according to your friend there is no indication of jealousy , and if your friend has the same strength and you are weaker , then you get a good thing or a beautiful girl your friend likes secretly , friends You will gladly stab you if they have the chance, even your family can sell you.the world is based on power and on the path of power, never gives for free and 100% sure to people, even in our world in this world a lot of dirty things betrayal of those closest to you without your knowledge.

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Hunter_69
Hunter_69Lv13

Yeah they should be beneath mc. maybe some slave spell to keep them in place 🤔 😏. little soy boy. talking about therapy. are you some kind of "mericaaa" level retard ?

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venomwave
venomwaveLv12

Lol, you really should see a therapist.

Zzz_808:After all the guy is right, do you think your friend will forever be your friend? , at least get full authority or trust if later your friend commits treason , according to your friend there is no indication of jealousy , and if your friend has the same strength and you are weaker , then you get a good thing or a beautiful girl your friend likes secretly , friends You will gladly stab you if they have the chance, even your family can sell you.the world is based on power and on the path of power, never gives for free and 100% sure to people, even in our world in this world a lot of dirty things betrayal of those closest to you without your knowledge.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Well the idiot who keeps hiding behind the naivety of the world, if you are only experiencing the light of the world don't talk stupid nonsense.

venomwave:Lol, you really should see a therapist.
venomwave
venomwaveLv12

Hahahahaha "light of the world". What an edgy guy lol.

Zzz_808:Well the idiot who keeps hiding behind the naivety of the world, if you are only experiencing the light of the world don't talk stupid nonsense.
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Idiot

venomwave:Hahahahaha "light of the world". What an edgy guy lol.
KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

I mean the other guy is kinda right about on what he said, I experience my family turning on me because i won the lottery they we're trying to get it from me and the worst they did is using my cat against me( I love my pets and most certainly my first pet 'ampy') the cat got "accidentally" ran over by a car, so fearing for my other pet i give them 3/4 of the lottery and use the remaining money to buy a small house far from my family.

venomwave:Hahahahaha "light of the world". What an edgy guy lol.
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