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zakaria_zexLv33yr
2022-02-04 16:08

I truly regret reading this fic. When the Mc is weaker than the talentles issei even with second true magic and boosted gear, you know he is trash ☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️😕😕😕😕😕😕☹️☹️☹️☹️😟😟😟😟😟😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

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rimuru_senseiLv1

Sabes q es la magia de Fate sabes q es caledoscopio lo roto q está xD mira hora derrotó caballero de lucyfer y cao cao y te digo q ya está rank maou

Virdan_snekLv4

Did you skip a few chapters? Where did you get this impression

dayvonjemontVIILv1

Because the author can write a good story? If mc was op you would drop it out of boredom.

Gato_BoladoLv2

are you just a troll or did you not read the story?

Phase_MorningStarLv3

The Mc Is Stronger Than Issei In This FF And Issei Has Plot Armor And The Second True Magic Can Only Travel To Parallel Worlds And Alternative Worlds And Even Though He Also Can Have Endless Magic Energy IT Doesn't Mean His Unbeatable He Doesn't Have Experience In Combat Like Other Entities That Have Thousands Years Of Experience And You Can't Say That He Has zelretch Memories Or Experience Because His Past Self Old Zelretch Only Gave Him General Information And The 2nd True Magic And Nothing Else. (Sry For My English)

KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

having endless mana already put you at the advantage beyond anyone else spamming spells one after another even an inexperienced man can win anyfight with it(unless the enemy is omnipotent or stronger than him by thousands) which the mc's enemy isn't. so nah mate that just bullshat, hays the amount of people having lowest of the low standards when it comes to reading are increasing(prolly the result of low tier harem isekai japanese anime running rampant these days)

Phase_MorningStar:The Mc Is Stronger Than Issei In This FF And Issei Has Plot Armor And The Second True Magic Can Only Travel To Parallel Worlds And Alternative Worlds And Even Though He Also Can Have Endless Magic Energy IT Doesn't Mean His Unbeatable He Doesn't Have Experience In Combat Like Other Entities That Have Thousands Years Of Experience And You Can't Say That He Has zelretch Memories Or Experience Because His Past Self Old Zelretch Only Gave Him General Information And The 2nd True Magic And Nothing Else. (Sry For My English)
Phase_MorningStarLv3

The Mc Can't Spam Spells Why Do You Think Zelretch Uses The Jewel sword If He Can Spam Spells Probably Because His Body Can't Use It Because It's Endless Magic Although Mc Has The Magus Sword(I Think) Mc Still Isn't Invisible Because He Can Still Be Killed If He Is Distracted Or Stabbed In The Heart With A Holy Weapon, IDK If The Mc's Sword Can Be Used As A Wand I Already Forgot Because I'm Stockpiling Chapters, All I Mean Is Mc Can Still Be Killed By An Extremely Fast Person Or Someone Who Can Teleport Behind Him So Even If He Has Endless Magic He Still Can Be Killed If He Is Inexperienced

KING_IN_YELLOW:having endless mana already put you at the advantage beyond anyone else spamming spells one after another even an inexperienced man can win anyfight with it(unless the enemy is omnipotent or stronger than him by thousands) which the mc's enemy isn't. so nah mate that just bullshat, hays the amount of people having lowest of the low standards when it comes to reading are increasing(prolly the result of low tier harem isekai japanese anime running rampant these days)
okyoLv4

I haven't read but according to the other guy he means the mc already have endless mana not necessarily zeltrech sooo technically u haven't countered his argument.

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Phase_MorningStarLv3

He Has Endless Magic Energy Because Of The Second Magic And Not Mana (The Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon (多重次元屈折現象, Tajuu Jigen Kussetsu Genshou?) is one fragment of the Second Magic, which is essentially the ability to create openings into parallel worlds. One can then interact with the 'other side' through this gap. Through the use of the Jewel Sword, one can access endless magical energy from parallel worlds.)

okyo:I haven't read but according to the other guy he means the mc already have endless mana not necessarily zeltrech sooo technically u haven't countered his argument.
dukkehLv4

It is logically explained why Will is not as strong as people believe he should be in first fate arc.

lord_couchpotatoLv3

Well so far mc is 2 years into the story and issei was already juggling super class devils and gods at this time without even training properly where as our mc can barely fight satan call after using all his tricks and that's when he has all the cheats available to him that were not available to issei.

Virdan_snek:Did you skip a few chapters? Where did you get this impression
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Virdan_snekLv4

The gods in DxD are very weak compared to the gods in the Nasuverse. And As of now? We just finished Apocrypha. Will is satan class as of right now and maybe even more powerful because he hasn’t unlocked juggernaut drive. Will without even going into balance breaker has blocked Akhilleus Kosmos a Noble Phantasm that is also a divine construct and Achilles ultimate trump card. It contains a miniature world inside of it. To be fair the noble phantasm was not fully ”activated” as its name was never said and the shield is not really designed for attacking. However willhelm still held both the conceptual and literal weight of a world without being in balance breaker. And this is just one example that I found in chapter 164 when willhelm revealed his full name

lord_couchpotato:Well so far mc is 2 years into the story and issei was already juggling super class devils and gods at this time without even training properly where as our mc can barely fight satan call after using all his tricks and that's when he has all the cheats available to him that were not available to issei.
LunariaNLv5

I'm pretty sure he can be in top 10, especially the higher ones, the only time he was ever serious was against Goetia, and inside Solomon's Temple/Workshop if I may add! bring me a single being in DxD that can actually fight Goetia. also may I add that he can access Juggernaut Drive? he just didn't need it ever before, I think he was about to use it once a long time ago, but Ddraig talked him out of it. plus True Longinus and it's Balance Breaker, his Power of Desutrction, high magic resistance, Divinity and Authority swords Magic and now he got Zanpakuto Kido spells (Hado/Bakudo) Hogyokou Aura & Semblance... the guy is versatile and pretty OP, ppl just doesn't realise that he never goes all out and he never used everything he had until he fought Goetia.

Virdan_snek:The gods in DxD are very weak compared to the gods in the Nasuverse. And As of now? We just finished Apocrypha. Will is satan class as of right now and maybe even more powerful because he hasn’t unlocked juggernaut drive. Will without even going into balance breaker has blocked Akhilleus Kosmos a Noble Phantasm that is also a divine construct and Achilles ultimate trump card. It contains a miniature world inside of it. To be fair the noble phantasm was not fully ”activated” as its name was never said and the shield is not really designed for attacking. However willhelm still held both the conceptual and literal weight of a world without being in balance breaker. And this is just one example that I found in chapter 164 when willhelm revealed his full name
SomeNoobLadLv1

One quick question, so you prefer illogical instant OP MC like Issei does or the more logical ones ? the problem with second true magic isn't the amount of mana but channeling it. A strong body or another way is needed A small cable used in homes can't hold the same current as those big ones. Let's say someone give you an unlimited water for as long as you lived but only through a single plastic straw. Now go compete with a water company. Add different type of energies for different power, you get another problem. Multiple powerset although it brings greater versatility, it also has an increase in difficulty

Runic_RhapsodyLv11

One star? Giving this a 1 star and the random brainless ChatGPT translated Power Wank fic 5 stars is why ratings on webnovel are meaningless.

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BoroxxLv11

As much as i would like to like this novel since i realy love all the worlds the mc has been to and will go to but i just realy cant. Its sad to say that IMO this novel is perfect, as long as you edit out the MC and basicly everything the MC has done in this novel. Lets start with the first and the most annoying thing with the MC for me is that the MC is Zelretch's reincarnation and has all the memories except the ones about ORT and all the plans related to it, this would have been fine, great even as i personaly love nasuverse magic as a perfect mix of flashy explosions and mysterious concept magic HOWEVER for some reason all the mcs knowledge of said magic is COMPLETELY ignored by the author outside of the second magics ability to teleport and empower his avarage swordsmanship to the point where it can fight heroic spirits... LIKE THE F dude, some of the most powerful magic in the second dimension completely degraded to travel tool+swordsmanship assist, i mean you hold what is basicly the key to space but all its used for is chopping people like a mindless berserker and failing as i cant remember the mcs "birds" has ever actualy harmed anyone even those significantly weaker than him. Not to mention any other magic Zelretch could/should have possessed as with his age he should have atleast have a solid basic in every magical discipline and a complete master in those he focuses on like jewelcraft wich literaly involves his title old man of the jewels and mystic code creation with the kaleidosticks, but nope, nothing at all, the story would have been 100% better off if it was just a "mc reincarnated in dxd with the ability to travel between worlds" fic as thats the only thing while extremely stretched that could be a ability Zelretch would have as while mentioned that the mc has Zelretch's knowledge however it is completely ignored after like the first 2 chapters in the story and has never basicly never been used after that as the MC fully focuses on runes and omnyoji. Like what is the point of being a reincarnation of Zelretch if the mc doesnt use any magic or ability that could be linked back to Zelretch at all. But all this while incredibly frustrating it is possible to ignore as long as you simply "delete" the fact that the MC possesses all of Zelretch's knowledge from your mind and just continue reading. BUT... then theres the big but, what makes this novel frustrating to the point of me wanting to tear my hairs out if the character of BOTH the MC and the Author. The MC is obnoxious, like extremely. He acts extremely disgusting to every female sentient being he meets and for some reason all women instantly get together with him and even seem to like his obnoxious character, i mean, i as a 27 year old male feel disgusted by his blatant sexual harasment and constant staring at female privates so how could every female he meets be happy with it? While lovers might be flattered by doing so but for random strangers thats a good way to get a restraining order. And for the MCs character the Author just tries too hard to make it "reasonable" that it has become anything but. Almost every action the MC takes is driven by a negative personality trait he possesses, and every other chapter the Author has to mention his Devil/Dragon traits to make excuses for his actions, i mean, cant the mc just do something just because he wants to? He always has to stare at this butt because his devil nature and always has to hoard that artifact because his dragon nature blahblah, the author is trying so hard that the mc has nothing but his devil/dragon traits for him to even get out of bed in the morning. Now the absolutely worst of the worst is that the Author has a hard one for a weak MC. The mc is incredibly powerful and knowledgeable but the Author always forces the MC to be in the weakest position possible in a fight going as far as literaly twisting black and white and distorting the facts to the extreme, with this i mean if the MC is a ultimate class devil on a normal day then the next day when the mc fights a high class evil then the mc would suddenly only be a mid class devil and if the day after that the mc would have to fight a super devil then the mc would be a demon king class devil... This is not even mentioning that all his powers are used the absolute worst way imagineable as being a powerful mage with powerful magic and knowledge he rushes head first with a sword while only possessing mediocore swordsmanship that has to be suplemented by the second magic just to be able to match true martial artist types and while using the boosted gear doing nothing but screaming and punching like a mindless berserker while he is actualy a mage and can boost his magic to terifying degrees, and even a sword would have a much better effect than mindlessly throwing punches like a commong street thug, i mean seriously? what is more likely to win the fight? punching someone or chopping off someones head? All in all, after a long rant and venting my frustration and hairloss brought by this promising yet utterly dissapointing story... READ THIS if you like a underdog MC who never grows and always stays 1 step behind his enemies in both strenght and wisdom and has to struggle all the way even if he has long since outgrown said enemy. DO NOT READ THIS if you hate a weak MC that will never grow stronger and has a overall rather obnoxious character that makes him look like a xianxia MC without self will. And a Author who completely twists black and white and falls into the same pitfalls over and over again with his underdog MC fetish.

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