you said you wanted a good fic but you broke it from chapter 4 with telling her he reincarnated which doesn't make much sense to me even if you trust someone it doesn't make sense to tell them that I hoped you would change it see in all the bad review it got I don't see a point in telling a person you got a system and you RE it just break the flow in the fic
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it's nearly a deal breaker for me but honestly if I was experiencing a clearly supernatural event like zombies I might be less sceptical in general.
I get that I would to but it was way before it happen
Oleem:it's nearly a deal breaker for me but honestly if I was experiencing a clearly supernatural event like zombies I might be less sceptical in general.
yup chapter 4 didn't go much after that just broke the flow yeah something isn't right with the girl head he saved but still I would look at him like bruh you good vybz she a yandere I think but meh
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as soon as i read that he told her i dropped it.
First rule about reincarnation is don't talk about reincarnation
that's like a universal law by now
LilxSwayne:First rule about reincarnation is don't talk about reincarnation
Man what a disappointment, I was going to read this but I guess now it's not worth it. Thanks for telling us anyway though.
2nd rule of reincarnation If you get a system don't talk about it
LilxSwayne:First rule about reincarnation is don't talk about reincarnation
