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PicoPico
PicoPicoLv23yr
2021-11-03 22:56

i d'ont know if the author will delet what i'm going to express here... i got an honest view here... its a trash one... the mc adopt the girl for no reason and tells the girl he is from another world and he got a system. the mc is trash in general... you will understand what i mean if you read the first 4 chapters.

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_D_S_
_D_S_Lv3

Exactly, the story idea is good, but I don't develop it well.

_D_S_
_D_S_Lv3

The only thing I liked was the three wishes (the super soldier serum, perfect memory and high compression) and that it reincarnated 7 years before the zombies appeared. I didn't like everything else.

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