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PicoPico
PicoPicoLv23yr
2021-11-03 22:56

i d'ont know if the author will delet what i'm going to express here... i got an honest view here... its a trash one... the mc adopt the girl for no reason and tells the girl he is from another world and he got a system. the mc is trash in general... you will understand what i mean if you read the first 4 chapters.

Reborn In The Walking Dead

Floridaboytonio
3.7
14 Chs

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_D_S_
_D_S_Lv3

Exactly, the story idea is good, but I don't develop it well.

3yr
_D_S_
_D_S_Lv3

The only thing I liked was the three wishes (the super soldier serum, perfect memory and high compression) and that it reincarnated 7 years before the zombies appeared. I didn't like everything else.

3yr
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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13

The mc tells an oc (who I believe is a love interest) about the fact that he is a reincarnated being with a system, and special powers. enough said

3yr

Melshan
MelshanLv7

Harém: Maggie, Andrea, Amy, Chloe. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

3yr
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5

you said you wanted a good fic but you broke it from chapter 4 with telling her he reincarnated which doesn't make much sense to me even if you trust someone it doesn't make sense to tell them that I hoped you would change it see in all the bad review it got I don't see a point in telling a person you got a system and you RE it just break the flow in the fic

3yr
RetroShredder
RetroShredderLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

MC idiot. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

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3yr
JokesOnYou
JokesOnYouLv3

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3yr
Targas
TargasLv2

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