The fanfic is interesting and well written, but it has a really annoying problem that made me give it 3 stars. The mc is a slave to the system, he cannot refuse any missions and they all have absurd failure punishments like eternal virginity, loss of status and death, death and more death. It's okay if the missions were optional, or if the punishments were something fun but not really harmful like becoming a woman for a day, all food tastes bad for a week, itchy and so on. But no, all punishments are absurd at the level that if the mc fails a mission he could very well end up dying or with irreversible/serious long term consequences. I won't drop it as it's all very well written and interesting, but I won't improve my grade as long as the mc remains a slave either.
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Sooo.... what about now?
It was a low grade system wish so the harshness actually makes sense.
This is not a low grade system, it is a slavery grade system. feels more like a punishment than a reward
Goldenswiftreader:It was a low grade system wish so the harshness actually makes sense.
but dude this fanfic comidy is too notch
Spelloyal:This is not a low grade system, it is a slavery grade system. feels more like a punishment than a reward
Lol he deserve it for being annoying and dumb idiot in the beginning.
Well why does he deserve it?
BAD_MAN:Lol he deserve it for being annoying and dumb idiot in the beginning.
read chapter 1-2 you will see
MonkeResurrection:Well why does he deserve it?
is there any romance? harem or just signal paring?
BAD_MAN:read chapter 1-2 you will see
idk if this is harem but I think the romance is emilia from The devil is part timer.
YukiShiro55:is there any romance? harem or just signal paring?
to the point it gets annoying and he has sakuras around himπ
YukiShiro55:is there any romance? harem or just signal paring?
is it bad that I would rather be a virgin for eternity than be a woman
I think it's weird that you'd prefer that to being a woman for a day, but that's okay. What would be absurd is to prefer to die. Preferring to be a virgin than a woman for life would make more sense
Reincarnation_God:is it bad that I would rather be a virgin for eternity than be a woman
He meant being a women for a day, the humoric kind of punishments which donβt have serious concequences but suck anyway
Spelloyal:I think it's weird that you'd prefer that to being a woman for a day, but that's okay. What would be absurd is to prefer to die. Preferring to be a virgin than a woman for life would make more sense
I completely agree the comedy is so good it overshadows any issues
7350Ledger:but dude this fanfic comidy is too notchimage
if you think about, power never comes for free so it seems to me that those kjnd of punishments make it more realistic. at least to me
The problem is that these punishments were valid for all quests and the quests are mandatory. Improves over time, now instead of death he loses skills if he fails
MlsZ132:if you think about, power never comes for free so it seems to me that those kjnd of punishments make it more realistic. at least to me
yeah the system is trash. no basic stuff like exercising which the mc needs . the mc is very childish for a supposed adult soul , and the fact the mc is creepy to everyone even with a normal body stat. the mc being repulsive to everyone killed my interest
As I recall he wasn't an adult, but it's been a long time so I could be wrong. Honestly the story improves with time and gets more interesting. The system also improves, but still has a smaller problem of force missions (punishments have become more reasonable). Another problem is how the MC never fails any mission, this is kind of weird. The only factor that discourages reading in the more recent chapters is the uncertain release schedule along with the long hiatus zem warning it has had in the past, it worries me about the future of the fanfic.
HadesChampion:yeah the system is trash. no basic stuff like exercising which the mc needs . the mc is very childish for a supposed adult soul , and the fact the mc is creepy to everyone even with a normal body stat. the mc being repulsive to everyone killed my interest
I would lose my virginity both as male and female. h*ntai makes it look kinda good.
Reincarnation_God:is it bad that I would rather be a virgin for eternity than be a woman
