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Nyxio
NyxioLv113yr
2021-11-18 01:45

Stop these punishments...Author if you didn't know, we readers like to relate to the MC which we read and we feel highly uncomfortable and stressed when such a system is given to MC. Most of us would leave at this point like I am now. Goodluck! I hope your next book will have more sense because this book seems hopeless and NOT funny at ALL.

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Overkill
OverkillLv14

ion... i think you should relate to the system in this case though.

NJSG
NJSGLv5

Go to bed child

Marianne_de
Marianne_deLv4

am I the only one who thinks that this guy has no sense of humor

MonkeResurrection
MonkeResurrectionLv2

Well if somone doesn't like what you like, it doesn't mean they don't have a sense of humor it's just different.

Marianne_de:am I the only one who thinks that this guy has no sense of humor
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Yes. You are a BIG masochist.

Marianne_de:am I the only one who thinks that this guy has no sense of humor
Marianne_de
Marianne_deLv4

idk but it depends on the type of ff I read just because it has a masochistic mc doesn't mean that I am one too, as long as it's well written and has good comedy is what makeses a great ff

Daoist_OverHeaven
Daoist_OverHeavenLv13

The system is actually helping him because if he doesnt man up he'll end dead either way, so by putting a penalty of death he will be pressured to do it and receive his well deserved reward.

WyvernIIV
WyvernIIVLv4

The greater the risks, the greater the rewards......the system gives him difficult task but not impossible ones We have yet to see what it is preparing him for. But i admit i do understand your view, its just that i kept reading to understand. THANK YOU FOR LOOKING AT MY RANT👍😁

WyvernIIV
WyvernIIVLv4

Like your story by the way "IMMORTAL SPIDERMAN"

Nyxio
NyxioLv11

Thanks for reading [img=recommend]

WyvernIIV:Like your story by the way "IMMORTAL SPIDERMAN"
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