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mikatamo1
mikatamo1Lv32yr
2022-04-29 07:33

The story is interesting and funny in about the first 60 chapters but as recently your story has become more and more boring as it started to become like those trash Chinese MC from the china novel, especially after the MC goes to Tensura as he acts no different to those Chinese MC trash and become more and more stupid as he tries to get benefit from Leon Cromwell the demon lord that can literally kill him anytime and the so call demon lord is also too soft to the point is looking like his IQ is below the average of someone as the demon lord like him should have

MY Life In The Multiverse

Bakorio
4.5
193 Chs

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

The fanfic is interesting and well written, but it has a really annoying problem that made me give it 3 stars. The mc is a slave to the system, he cannot refuse any missions and they all have absurd failure punishments like eternal virginity, loss of status and death, death and more death. It's okay if the missions were optional, or if the punishments were something fun but not really harmful like becoming a woman for a day, all food tastes bad for a week, itchy and so on. But no, all punishments are absurd at the level that if the mc fails a mission he could very well end up dying or with irreversible/serious long term consequences. I won't drop it as it's all very well written and interesting, but I won't improve my grade as long as the mc remains a slave either.

3yr

MYTH_
MYTH_Lv4

I wish I could give this Fan-Fic more than 5 stars but I am unable to do that. All I can do is thank you author for sharing this unusually wonderful Fiction with us readers.

3yr
Nyxio
NyxioLv4

Stop these punishments...Author if you didn't know, we readers like to relate to the MC which we read and we feel highly uncomfortable and stressed when such a system is given to MC. Most of us would leave at this point like I am now. Goodluck! I hope your next book will have more sense because this book seems hopeless and NOT funny at ALL.

3yr
Timelesstrix
TimelesstrixLv6

Pretty decent character interactions that the MC has with the other anime cast... the MC's situation is very generic as a system slave...As summary says, MC is completely reliant on system from what i've seen so far

3yr
Reaper_X_7998
Reaper_X_7998Lv15

GIVE ME MOAR CHAPTERS MOAR..................................................................................................................

3yr
0Zagreus0
0Zagreus0Lv14

Death to Sorata.💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣💣

3yr
7350Ledger
7350LedgerLv3

ahhhhh i fuc*ing love this fanfic....... mc is embodiment of 'if i am going to suffer your also going to suffer'...... and comedy is top notch 🤣🤣🤣..

2yr
Heavenly_Demon13
Heavenly_Demon13Lv3

Plz don't harem. .. No harem. .. No harem. .. No harem. ... No harem... .no harem.. .. No harem. .. .No harem. .. .. No harem. ... No. Harem.

2yr
Aizen_81
Aizen_81Lv1

Pros: Very good comedy. Very good hero character. The dialogues are wonderful and enjoyable and get a full mark. The negatives: a hero, despite his good personality in dialogues, but he grumbles a lot within himself and he is unstable at all. I would have preferred to be smart and adapt instead of complaining. Very slow progress, but I think he would be perfect with a smart and emotionally stable character, so he will get through minor problems without worrying about him as a viewer who only waits for the moment of his downfall because he is a coward I will say that he is incompetent instead of a coward

3yr
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