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XxPedroxX
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2022-01-03 02:32

Intelligent , Manipulative , Neutral , Alpha loving people like me stay away from this book . The summary of the story is a BETA MC STORY who is humiliated by a flat-chested loli who can't quite resist (and somehow doesn't reciprocate?).

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Aeol_Omnius
Aeol_OmniusLv2

I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

Mortal_God
Mortal_GodLv5

bruh im guessing that you havent even read the fic yet and you already decided that you dont like it and the mc is a beta? if you actually read the fic you would know that the mc is not like you have just described.

borbking_chken
borbking_chkenLv4

describing your personality like that makes it seem like your overcompensating for a lack of personality

XxPedroxX
XxPedroxXLv4

So what do the things I love and my personality have to do with it? I will never understand people's Beta MC Love and Defense and when I reply, nothing changes, so why are you replying all along and making us both busy with this empty chat?

borbking_chken:describing your personality like that makes it seem like your overcompensating for a lack of personality
TriPlatinum
TriPlatinumLv5

This fic is actually much better than you describe it as. Are you sure you read that far enough? The mc was being brainwashed into loyalty by the runes, and was weak because he didn't much time to get stronger. His personality was weak and he made some bad decisions AT THE START. This all changes and he becomes a legit powerhouse. He ends up waging war on the world in later chapters and has so much character development that it's amazing. This fic is definitely a breath of fresh air, and takes a much more realistic approach. (And if this is about the mc being weak, well, he doesn't get any weaker. Only stronger, because with his cheats the only way is up.) Also, the mc takes on those traits you described, with a much more realistic approach.

Hahalool
HahaloolLv14

bruh simple advise. talk less, read more u ain't gon be no alpha without knowledge and patience

XxPedroxX:So what do the things I love and my personality have to do with it? I will never understand people's Beta MC Love and Defense and when I reply, nothing changes, so why are you replying all along and making us both busy with this empty chat?
XxPedroxX
XxPedroxXLv4

I don't understand, I already gave this book a chance and I didn't like it, I explained it myself and criticized it. I didn't like the course of the story, Beta Mc, plot etc. I'm not going to torture myself to read this book, no matter how good or bad it went afterwards, and I'm sending you this gif and I'd appreciate it if you could tell others like me who didn't like this book. And the rating of the book says it all.

Hahalool:bruh simple advise. talk less, read more u ain't gon be no alpha without knowledge and patience
Hahalool
HahaloolLv14

XDD sadge

XxPedroxX:I don't understand, I already gave this book a chance and I didn't like it, I explained it myself and criticized it. I didn't like the course of the story, Beta Mc, plot etc. I'm not going to torture myself to read this book, no matter how good or bad it went afterwards, and I'm sending you this gif and I'd appreciate it if you could tell others like me who didn't like this book. And the rating of the book says it all.
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Ventura
VenturaLv5

How far you read? I hated this novel, but give it a chance when got bored and turns out the novel was actually pretty good. If you read pass chapter 25, the MC stop being a simp and after the Zero no Tsukaima arc, he's a straight up beast.

XxPedroxX:I don't understand, I already gave this book a chance and I didn't like it, I explained it myself and criticized it. I didn't like the course of the story, Beta Mc, plot etc. I'm not going to torture myself to read this book, no matter how good or bad it went afterwards, and I'm sending you this gif and I'd appreciate it if you could tell others like me who didn't like this book. And the rating of the book says it all.
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