Almost a great story, uniquish attempt at a divergence in the story, and an entertaining change of pace. only problem is the author seems to pander to the audience that wants a tool bag MC who should only think about benefits and gains. like this might not be his new reality. Seemingly annoyed by all the main characters. "Ron isn't useful, grangers annoying, Dumbledore is evil." Its like the author wants a decent human being as the MC but keeps listening to the critics to be more evil. its honestly kinda sad. other than that I find the story interesting. hopefully the MC remembers that the friends in the book had unquestionable loyalty for some reason he actually questions them? lol must be an AU?
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You must have never met a Hermione in real life, I have and I can tell you, she is extremely irritating, she gets angry when someone does better than her in a subject even though she has good grades, she tends to correct others without anyone asking In her opinion, dealing with this personality every day is extremely boring, as for Ron, many have a very bad impression of him because of the films where he is almost dead weight, where in the books he is basically an ordinary teenager with positive points and negative, and of course the Molly Weasley scene was also very suspicious, not to the point where she was a thief like in many fanfics or Ginny was a girl who just wants fame, of course the romance was terrible with almost no construction with some attitudes contradicting what it was presentation of her personality.
