Item: The Lion Cub (HP SI)
Rating: 3.8
Author: Selectials

SelectialsLv42yr

2022-02-04 01:28

1) The quality of the letter is excellent. 2) Stability update - medium. 3) The plot development is bad. The plot changes, but the ratio of the number of chapters to the development of the plot is too large. And because of this, the plot will quickly get bored. 4) The character design is bad. Why doesn't he think about the consequences of his actions. He spends a year on the plot with the tournament of wizards and does not think at all how to develop properly. 5) The background of the world is bad. The same as in other projects.

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