Item: The Lion Cub (HP SI)
Rating: 3
Author: DaoistyQNGiX

DaoistyQNGiXLv142yr

2022-09-27 10:45

Was enjoying the story until the author added some random OC “immortal witch” that is somehow Harry’s grandmother. There was no lead up to it lol just randomly “yeah he has some immortal OP grandma”. Ruined the whole story for me because of how random, forced, and pointless it was to add to the story. If the story was worse then I would’ve rated this lower but besides that random addition it was decent.

The Lion Cub (HP SI)

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