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If he is kage level with Rinnegan activated, how could he not take the soul of a Jounin? It simply doesn't make sense and you end up contradicting yourself: either he has the strength of a kage or he doesn't. If he has the strength of a kage, he should have the ability to take the soul of the Jounin and not that he needs it to defeat a Jounin. After all, a kage would destroy several Jounin alone with ease, and I'm not even talking about the legendary ones.

I liked it, the power level was adequate for the current power level of this universe in its history, and it still managed to make the MC special without being op. The only thing that worries me is the year of the MC, because the year he was born is before the canon and after the Marauders era, making him only interact with OC characters, which takes all the fun out of the story, at least for me. If everyone around him is an OC character, I'll abandon the story, even though it has a lot of potential. I don't see any fun in the MC interacting with a bunch of OCs.

Wow, both are great options. I like them both, but I've never seen any story with Jane as a romantic partner. But Roseli has her own charm, of course, if Alice were in the series, there wouldn't even be a dispute. I honestly think that Jane, because she's a different character and probably never used, Roseli has a dark backstory and I like that, and Jane, just for being a girl from the enemy clan, already makes it very interesting. I always like unexpected couples as long as there are reasons for them to be together, that is, they have to have a good construction. To this day, in the fanfic universe, Harry Potter and Pansy P is my favorite couple and it would definitely have been great if JKR knew how to write romance between the characters and the protagonist ended up with a bitch in the end. Ginny Weasley was a huge waste of potential. The romance between her and Harry should have been built from the end of the second book to become something in the fourth book. Instead, she dated a few characters before getting to Harry, outside of her time in professional Quidditch, and that was because she supposedly loved him. That was probably one of the reasons for the official couple's great rejection. The author kind of took away the magic. from the fictional novel, it goes off on tangents a lot, anyway Jane is a good option and provides the opportunity for some interesting developments.

Could you tell me what his power is?

Will MC's hair and eye color change in each chapter?

I hate stories like this where there's this nonsense about destiny, a lame excuse used by authors who want to stick to the original material at least in their main events and their consequences, that is, a main event can even be changed but the consequence remains the same, which doesn't make much sense.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

Now that I stopped to think, if he was supposedly born in this body he shouldn't have so many compatibility problems, just as Jack was able to use his abilities with almost no damage to his body, the MC should be capable of the same, after all, technically he was born with this body he should be 100% compatible.

Ah, it seems that the MC is not going to leave the situation completely to chance, but the explanation is obvious to those who watched the series. Jack was so powerful because he had his own body that was 100% compatible since he was born with it, so he can almost exercise his power at almost no cost and that's because he didn't even try to improve his body as was done with Lucifer's vessel that was altered by Crowley, or he can drink demon blood, considering that there is Raven, the daughter of one of the most powerful demons in DC, could help, maybe even make a hybrid body with her blood, besides that she would be an excellent match for the MC who could help her truly accept herself, besides she is really hot.

The MC would only have a weak body if he wanted to, magic and science to improve his body in the DC universe, not to mention that even in the supernatural universe there are ways like magic to strengthen a vessel, he could even use his DNA to make a better body, like a nephilim body, he has all the technology and money to do that, but choosing to have a weak body to have one to make writing easier is ridiculous.