5 stars........................that's it. it's so good that it's illegal to be on this platform why? 1) first it's chapters are big and chunky already around 4k-7k range 2) mc is smart(finally someone has a soul to help Harry) 3) he isn't a dense harem protagonist 4) finally magic isn't some science but magic itself oh I know how many fics try to make sense of magic like bro you are taking the magic out of...magic. 5) unique power system like cultivation seemly blend into the universe the issue is that author sometimes struggle to flesh out characters unique personalities so sometimes if I remove the names it would feel like a person is talking to itself .( this would only be resolved with experience) I think author need to add the characters unique qwerks like hargids accent or their way of talking(Harry sass), Hermione bossy nature, Daphne icy personality, etc. Other than that it has some tropes (dark lord Dumbledore) is one. family magic is one( occlumency is op) the only thing is that just don't bash ron he was fine in novel (movie one is trash) and Hermione seems like she has no flaws so some character development is needed. + Dumbledore being manipulative is not my cup of tea like he has like 50 yrs he could have ruled the wizarding world if he was smart (which dark lord Dumbledore are not... usually) but yea you could try to make him smart/genius he is.. on that note I'll deduct 1 star from world background for that. goodbye author
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Thanks for the review! I'll just make a single comment/correction: Family magic isn't a thing in this fic. Family magic in fics is usually magic that is restricted/bound to the bloodline and only capable of being performed if you have that bloodline. In my fic, it's just old families hoarding knowledge. Anyone can do it if, they just don't have access. But other than that, thanks for the review and enjoy the fic!
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