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get well soon author take a good break don't worry about chs your health is the priority.

isn't this should be 6 balls?

bro wana power cuck Dumbledore 😭🙏🏼

Okay first of all....writing quality is very good and it's getting even better now...the story started off strong then got average in between ch..like mc doing bc achievement but still get little...seems a bit unrealistic... conversation seems repetitive it got way better now so if you have the patience I say bear with it and it's gets way better. that's why I am taking 1 star of story development .update stability is good getting a ch in 1-2 days.... sometimes bonus ch too. my only criticism is that it author has plannto rewrite middle ch where every conversation feels distant/robotic even synthetic like following a script and change it what it is now I feel it would be good for the novel.i still thing there is a room for improvement in writing but overall...... 4.8/5

it will be harder to grind stats after a certain extent by training so I guess he is stockpilling for the future in case of emergency

dear author now you have made your writing style better and improved than before.Thanknyou I now like your writing style cuz it's not just copy and paste the same things again and again the characters now look fleshed out the way you add subtle things that happens in cricket which were not written this is now look like a genuine novel. now take my stones

it's in Uchiha blood to be that gud in shuriken

everything is a threat as long as we don't understand it.once you understand it's no longer a threat.

like warhammer