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HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv47mth
2024-10-06 00:41

The Mc is bland with everyone being a copy and paste meaning no depth to any of them. With minor spelling mistakes scattered throughout the novel. And a fairly boring premise of a guardian god thing wanting a new friend, so he sent Mc to make sure Harry— the guardian’s soon to be friend— will turn out as he intends.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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4.7
28 Chs

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Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Big disagree, I especially liked the new depth that was given to the Malfoy couple without whitewashing them. Your review is overly critical for the book simply not being to your taste

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HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4

There is no significant difference in personality between Mc, Harry, and Daphne from what I could tell and with them being the protagonist for the foreseeable future the characters are bland.

Kil0:Big disagree, I especially liked the new depth that was given to the Malfoy couple without whitewashing them. Your review is overly critical for the book simply not being to your taste
6mth
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Kil0
Kil0Lv4

Incorrect

HereForGoodRead:There is no significant difference in personality between Mc, Harry, and Daphne from what I could tell and with them being the protagonist for the foreseeable future the characters are bland.
6mth
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HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4

Alright

Kil0:Incorrect
6mth
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GuYueFangYuan
GuYueFangYuanLv4

Agreed

HereForGoodRead:There is no significant difference in personality between Mc, Harry, and Daphne from what I could tell and with them being the protagonist for the foreseeable future the characters are bland.
6mth
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Rak
RakLv5

this is peak HP fiction. must try. mc is going about the magical world of HP in a mother of learning logical way.

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omnikinesis
omnikinesisLv6

This is the third greatest fanfic and novel I had have ever read and trust I have seen plenty, practically hundreds of thousands... Well I wish you luck with your writing ✍️ and please don't keep 🙏 us hanging

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Nine11P2
Nine11P2Lv4

5 stars........................that's it. it's so good that it's illegal to be on this platform why? 1) first it's chapters are big and chunky already around 4k-7k range 2) mc is smart(finally someone has a soul to help Harry) 3) he isn't a dense harem protagonist 4) finally magic isn't some science but magic itself oh I know how many fics try to make sense of magic like bro you are taking the magic out of...magic. 5) unique power system like cultivation seemly blend into the universe the issue is that author sometimes struggle to flesh out characters unique personalities so sometimes if I remove the names it would feel like a person is talking to itself .( this would only be resolved with experience) I think author need to add the characters unique qwerks like hargids accent or their way of talking(Harry sass), Hermione bossy nature, Daphne icy personality, etc. Other than that it has some tropes (dark lord Dumbledore) is one. family magic is one( occlumency is op) the only thing is that just don't bash ron he was fine in novel (movie one is trash) and Hermione seems like she has no flaws so some character development is needed. + Dumbledore being manipulative is not my cup of tea like he has like 50 yrs he could have ruled the wizarding world if he was smart (which dark lord Dumbledore are not... usually) but yea you could try to make him smart/genius he is.. on that note I'll deduct 1 star from world background for that. goodbye author

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LazyBlanketCat
LazyBlanketCatLv1

Only read the 9 chapters currently published so far but I am loving the novel. Keep up the good work Mr. Author. To fellow Taoists of the Book, I highly recommend this fanfic.

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Mockingbird_2179
Mockingbird_2179Lv4

This is hands down one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions, there is. I only wish there were more chapters, but the chapters are LONG(4K TO 5K). So I'm not too upset about it. I'm just nervous that it will be dropped.

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Khaled_Azzam
Khaled_AzzamLv4

This is one of the best fanfiction ever. I know you're doing it for fun and not following a strict schedule in uploading. But I hope that you continue this fanfic till the end and upload a bit more consistently, because this fanfiction really deserves more chapters. Thank you so much for producing such amazing work❤.

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Seeker_
Seeker_Lv14

Reveal spoiler

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Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

Really great story, without ruining the harry potter world vibe you've managed to use your version of cultivation as well as starting on the global stage of the magic world as well Very well written, no noticeable grammar or spelling mistakes, likeable mc, so far the bashing hasn't been extreme into the stupid levels and is actually believable and not just crack fic bashing that you see so often I look forward to see how you're gonna continue and hope you stay with the story and finish it

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