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SeventhLordLv52yr
2023-01-03 12:58

I'm ngl, I enjoyed the story at first but the cons outweigh the pros at this point (50 chapters in). The dialogue was akward with multiple misplaced commas and overuse of "my lord". Other people also profit from the MC's efforts. I wasn't against other people getting stronger as a butterfly effect of his existence like if magic came back earlier and was expanded or if the gods saw his potential and started becoming more active; but they level up with him, meaning that despite him being the one to put in the effort and not having complete access to the benefits provided by his level, they get all the benefits. The thing that really put me off though was that he became a pedophile simp (technically the same age range in his new life but he spent 100+ years in Heaven and was an adult in his previous life). Basically he lets a tomboy girl beat him up despite suffering extreme training and not even dodging.

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Duncan_RandarAuthor

I welcome with open arms the thrashing about punctuation and too many my lords (this is something I need to correct, when I find the time) that's why I wrote 'Draft' on the title. As for Mc's level up. It's not exactly like that. The other 'Blessings' don't level up automatically when Mc levels up. They can only level up to the next level if MC levels up. it's different. Example, even if a blessed accumulates exp to level up to 10, if MC (the catalysing anomaly) stays at 5, all others will stay at 5 at most. it is explained in later chapters. Thanks anyway for reading the first 50!

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